Talk:Cheetah reintroduction in India/GA1
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Nominator: Magentic Manifestations (talk · contribs) 04:47, 15 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 04:04, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
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editI'll be reviewing this. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 04:04, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking this up. Let me know the comments. Magentic Manifestations (talk) 06:16, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Let me look at this now. Expect comments in a few hours. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 18:12, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
Review
edit- more than 70 years ago. It would be better to state the date
- Done
- The Asiatic cheetah (Acinonyx jubatus venaticus) whose range once included most of India were driven to extinction locally with the last known sightings recorded in early 1950s. Why are you repeating the same info?
- Modified the line to indicate the reasons
- After the cheetahs became locally extinct to Following the local extinction,
- Done
- re-introduce cheetahs back into the wild. Where is the wild?
- Added
- This included initial plans to re-introduce the asiatic cheetah from Iran in the 1970s which were shelved due to political instability in Iran and the dwindling population of the species in the existent range. We are missing punctuations
- Added
- from the north western India "The" is not needed
- Done
- to the Gangetic plain on the east In the east
- Done
- from wild mothers What?
- Rephrased
- population of Cheetahs. Why the caps?
- Changed
- Cheetahs rarely breed in captivity as there is only one record of a litter ever born to captive animals. This is false. Does this refer to Asiatic cheetahs? The source is also 15 years old.
- It refers to asiatic cheetahs. There is only one litter ever born to captive animals. Giving an alternate source as well.
- In the late 1908s, What?
- Corrected
- link separated to Split (phylogenetics)
- Not clear
- into the wild in steps In steps?
- Re-phrased
- the first recorded live cheetah births It was one birth
- It was four cubs? Anyways, changed.
- was reported reportedly Why?
- Corrected
- Any information on the impacts of reintroducing cheetahs to these parks?
- Have added a section.
- For background, please only use journals, books or scholarly articles
- Done for the most part except the recent record of asiatic cheetah breeding (CNN)
- Shouldn't project cheetah fall under Re-introduction plans
- Modified the first title to early re-introduction plans; If I move project cheetah under it, it will create too many tiers
- In see also please remove all the other non Acinonyx jubatus articles and add Project cheetah as further information. Basically, just remove the see also section.
- Removed.
- More to come. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 16:34, 2 May 2024 (UTC)
References
edit- Cite 4 needs page nos.
Fixed
- Cite 5 needs page nos.
Fixed
- Shouldn't there be author names in the news citations?
Not a mandatory requirement. Still added authors wherever available/applicable
Ans:
Please try to solve the above problem. Just for fun :) It's very simple. My work is done here. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 07:21, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
@Wolverine, comments have been addressed. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Magentic Manifestations (talk • contribs)
- Thanks for your work and answer. Promoting now. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 04:02, 8 May 2024 (UTC)