Talk:Cherry Valley massacre/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Magicpiano in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:53, 26 August 2012 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteriaReply

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    This is poorly worded: Butler's authority with the Indians was undermined by his poor treatment of Joseph Brant the leader of the Mohawks and he claimed to be powerless to restrain the Seneca in his report of the action. Rephrased Magic♪piano 12:33, 27 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

Thank you for taking the time to review this; I think I've addressed your concern. Magic♪piano 12:33, 27 August 2012 (UTC)Reply