Talk:Chiesa del Carmine, Messina

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Jeanne boleyn in topic Too wordy, poorly written and incorrect locations

Too wordy, poorly written and incorrect locations

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The article is too verbose In the section on the Carmelites in Messina and reads more like a guide book than an encyclopedia article. Additionally, the street locations are incorrect. This piece needs a lot of rewriting and trimming Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 16:18, 5 June 2021 (UTC)Reply