Talk:Chili cookoff

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Goldbringer in topic Style of Article

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Er, the use of the second person in this article is highly suspect.

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As noted above, the writing style of this article is overly promotional and is not, in my view, encyclopaedic content. I'll check back in a few weeks to see if anyone has made changes, if not I'll copyedit. Goldbringer 23:55, 24 August 2007 (UTC)Reply

Done. Goldbringer 22:59, 2 September 2007 (UTC)Reply