Talk:China Club of Seattle

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Mniiya

I recognize this from Pacific Connections! There are a few things I'm wondering after reading the article/might be helpful to include if the info exists. How successful was the Club at reaching their economic goals laid out in the lead. You mention the Club sending delegates to Asia and creating scholarships, but was this the bulk of its work? If not, what was? How big/significant was this organization? I think more historical context in the Background/Formation section would maybe be helpful in understanding this organization's significance (i.e. what US-China relations were like, why major trade had been unsuccessful, how the US viewed Chinese Americans, etc.). I also think the sentence in which you list the Club's economic concerns in the lead could be moved elsewhere in the article? and replaced by more general statements about what the Club did. In general though I thought you did a good job of being objective, and I learned a lot just from reading this! Mniiya (talk) 02:39, 2 December 2016 (UTC)Reply