Talk:Chris Carter (screenwriter)/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by TBrandley in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 16:23, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
I'll review this on August 20, 2012, since I'm on vacation up until then. Sorry for the wait. TBrandley 13:52, 16 August 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: Link science fiction
- Lede: Fox → the Fox network
- The X-Files and success: Move image to right, as per MOS:IMAGELOCATION
- The X-Files and success: $2 million, US million?
- Accolades: Align references to the center
- References: Ref. 50, small text is not needed. MOS:ACCESS.
- External links: Categories should be listed in alphabetical order
Wow; great article. Not many issues at all. On hold. TBrandley 17:16, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Hope the holidays went well. I've addressed pretty much anything; the point about dollars being US dollars I left as the first mention of the currency already contains a link to United States dollar. Everything else I believe I've seen to. GRAPPLE X 17:52, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks! Holidays were great. :) This article looks good. One more concern is that every section should be mentioned in the lead, as per WP:LEDE. Then, I'll pass. Cheers, TBrandley 17:59, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
- Wasn't sure what wasn't already reflected so I expanded out a few sentences which I thought could do with better coverage. GRAPPLE X 18:20, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
- Okay; great. I will for sure pass this. TBrandley 02:14, 20 August 2012 (UTC)
- Wasn't sure what wasn't already reflected so I expanded out a few sentences which I thought could do with better coverage. GRAPPLE X 18:20, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks! Holidays were great. :) This article looks good. One more concern is that every section should be mentioned in the lead, as per WP:LEDE. Then, I'll pass. Cheers, TBrandley 17:59, 19 August 2012 (UTC)