Talk:Christian Brothers Academy (Albany, New York)

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Use of first person narrative and overly generous superlatives make the article bias. Just tell the facts and let the reader draw their own conclusions. Also, the history delves too deeply into the unremarkable: concentrate on the highlights.

Nbruschi 17:13, 28 May 2006 (UTC)

The history section is copied verbatim from [1]. Its copyright status should be confirmed. --Dforest 00:20, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

First-person voice is not employed. I count two superlatives, neither of which (largest, latest) seem overly generous. Narrative is a bit wordy, favorable but does not seem biased in the sense of failing to equally represent both sides. Not sure what the other side is in this case--parties opposed to the school? School website domain is temporarily unrenewed, checking copyright with webmaster. Austin baze 18:37, 18 November 2006 (UTC)

Information from website referred to by user Dforest above is "Copyright 2006 Christian Brothers Academy." I believe there is no longer a NPOV dispute so am removing the tag in the absence of any objection to my post of 2 years ago.

Austin baze (talk) 04:34, 18 September 2008 (UTC)

Scandal

Such sections seem to be de rigueur in school articles, but is it necessary or incumbent upon Wikipedia to include every inappropriate sexual tryst involving a faculty member? 76.248.147.199 (talk) 18:14, 5 January 2012 (UTC)

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