Talk:Chucho's Steps/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk) 19:38, 9 July 2011 (UTC)

General notes

Lead

"is an album released" - however, in the infobox, there was a previous album released by him. Was this the second, third, fourth, etc., album?

Overview

I don't think this sentence is really needed in this section (The other nominees in the category were Tango Grill by Pablo Aslan, Second Chance by Hector Martignon, Psychedelic Blues by Poncho Sanchez, and ¡Bien Bien! by the Wayne Wallace Latin Jazz Quintet)

The Band

There's no period. Try re-wording or splitting this huge sentence in half.

Selected tracks

01. Link opening track.

Reception

"In The Washington Post Mike Joyce called the album a "keyboard tour de force"[1] there's a missing period, before the citation.

Track listing

Try going with this template Template:Track listing so it can be a bit easier for the reader.

Credits

There's no source here. Example of a GA song article Amor Prohibido (song) with an example of a source that can be used here.

Final notes

The article seems ok to me, however, its somewhat short. I'm going to put this article  On hold for seven days, until further development can be made and address the issues that I had stated. Maybe adding more reviews, in selected tracks try adding all the songs (if possible) and add relevant information about them that can help expand the article just a tiny bit. Also maybe adding a sample can help as well. Good luck, AJona1992 (talk) 19:38, 9 July 2011 (UTC)

Failing article, editor hasn't responded to messages and haven't fixed any of the problems. AJona1992 (talk) 00:08, 16 July 2011 (UTC)