Talk:Circus Oz

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Laterthanyouthink in topic Needs update by independent editors

Founding date

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The article says:

Circus Oz was founded in December 1978 in Melbourne with its first performance season in March 1978.

It seems dubious that its first performance was after it was founded. Should this be March 1979? sroc 💬 13:40, 27 May 2015 (UTC)Reply

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Needs update by independent editors

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I don't know what's been going on here, but I note that there have been a couple of single-purpose obviously COI editors adding a huge amount of unnecessary detail about the internal goings-on of the company, with poor citing and formatting, etc. I don't have time to sort it all out myself now, so have reverted to an earlier copy before it all started. A Wikipedia article doesn't need to contain lengthy lists of every destination on every tour, either. A (brief) paraphrase of whatever the review covered, the outcome of the review leading to the attempted closure, and the current situation is all it really needs here. If one of the involved editors wishes to post a few paragraphs with suggested wording, with citations, that would save some time for an uninvolved editor to add it to the article. Laterthanyouthink (talk) 10:13, 10 October 2022 (UTC)Reply