Talk:Civil Air Patrol/GA1

GA Review

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   I fixed a few acronym inconsistencies, and tagged an unclear statement.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   I left one citation tag for a paragraph that wasn't cited at all.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Really close. In addition to the tags I left, The age of the audio recording concerns me. ON HOLD for up to a week for the minor improvements needed. Jclemens (talk) 03:55, 4 September 2008 (UTC)

   I have addressed your concerns. I hope it now fully meets the criteria. —  scetoaux (T|C) 22:19, 5 September 2008 (UTC)