Talk:Clearwater Bay Golf & Country Club
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Facilities
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Information to be added: Facilities Explanation of issue: The Club offers sports and recreational facilities, e.g. golf course, driving range, putting green, gym, spa, outdoor swimming pool, tennis courts, table-tennis room, badminton courts, squash courts, basketball court and football pitch, etc. It also put forth a wide range of dining venues, e.g. Oasis, Ocean View, Horizons, Poolside Café, BreeZes and The Wine Cellar. Other facilities provided in the Club include Pro Shop, Country Store, multi-function rooms, Oasis lawn children playroom and outdoor playground. References supporting change: https://web.archive.org/web/20160107035257/http://www.cwbgolf.org/fnb-oasis.aspx https://web.archive.org/web/20160106053846/http://www.cwbgolf.org/fnb-ocean-view.aspx https://web.archive.org/web/20160107091205/http://www.cwbgolf.org/fnb-Poolside-Cafe.aspx https://web.archive.org/web/20160107024743/http://www.cwbgolf.org/fnb-BreeZes.aspx https://web.archive.org/web/20160106213014/http://www.cwbgolf.org/fnb-wine-cellar.aspx https://web.archive.org/web/20160106053846/http://www.cwbgolf.org/fnb-ocean-view.aspx Source20 (talk) 08:08, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
- I have added a new section called "facilities". Per WP:NOTDIR, I have not listed the restaurants and retail shops individually. Citobun (talk) 13:00, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Promotion of Sports
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Information to be added: Promotion of Sports Explanation of issue: The Club is committed to promoting sports development in Hong Kong. It has hosted various local and internally events and tournaments, such as the PGA Tour China Clearwater Bay Open, the World Amateur Team Championships, Hong Kong Tennis Champions Cup and Sport for All Day. The Club also supports Hong Kong local athletes in developing their professional career. • Golf ambassadors: Jason Hak, Motin Yeung, Matthew Cheung and Isabella Leung • Tennis ambassador: Eudice Chong
References supporting change: http://www.tennishk.org/en/news-detail/hong-kong-tennis-champions-cup-2018/ https://www.lcsd.gov.hk/en/sfad/2019/supporting.html https://www.hkgolfer.com/around-hkga/jason-hak-signs-clearwater-bay-ambassador https://www.pressreader.com/hong-kong/hk-golfer/20180801/281492162116431 https://www.scmp.com/sport/tennis/article/3042320/hong-kongs-new-number-one-tennis-ace-eudice-chong-ready-take-reins-and Source20 (talk) 08:20, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
- I have added a new "Events" section that includes the tournaments you listed. The other content, and the suggested language, is promotional in tone and not encyclopedic. Citobun (talk) 13:02, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
External links
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Information to be removed: External links Explanation of issue: It is requested to remove "Golf course review on golf007.com" external link because this link shows garbled text References supporting change: http://www.golf007.com/golf_course/reviewed/clearwaybaygc/clearwater_review.htm Source20 (talk) 08:24, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
- Done. Thank you for following the policy for users with COI. Kind regards, Citobun (talk) 12:54, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
External links
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Information to be removed: "Facilities Summary" external link Explanation of issue: It is suggested to remove "Facilities Summary" external link because this link is a private club membership company website, which is not appropriate to promote it References supporting change: https://www.mformembership.com/MoreDetail.aspx?id=125&clubname=Clearwater+Bay+Golf+%26+Country+Club&clubtype=Country%20Individual Source20 (talk) 06:56, 6 August 2020 (UTC)
Charity Events
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Information to be added: The Club has always been committed to demonstrating social responsibilities. Established in 2003, the Community Outreach Programme (COP) aims to serve the neighbourhood and give back to the community. The COP initiatives spin around three major areas, including family care, harmony of neighbourhood, and environmental preservation. Collaborating with its charity partners, the Club organises a spectrum of community and fundraising activities throughout the years, including but not limited to charity golf, run and walk; festive luncheons, wellness sessions, lucky bag and free use of Club facilities for the elderly and the underprivileged; reading scheme, child sponsorship, wellness and care programme for the less fortunate students; parent and child workshops and seminars; as well as emergency relief for neighbouring communities. Moreover, the Club has organised charity online concert and online wellness class, contributes the society through different channels. Charity partners of COP come from diverse backgrounds, covering a wide spectrum of services. They range from education-oriented and upholding the well-being of elders, to emergency relief as well as environmental preservation. Major charity partners include but not limited to, Christian Action, Haven of Hope Christian Service, St. James’ Settlement, Lifeline Express Foundation, Mother’s Choice, World Vision Hong Kong, Caritas HK and HK Federation of Youth Groups. Explanation of issue: The Club is a non-profit organisation, throughout the years, it has been working with a group of local and internationally recognized charities through its Community Outreach Programme(COP). Other Clubs such as Jockey Club and Hong Kong Golf Club also include this section. Therefore, to make the content more complete, it is suggested to include charity events and charity partners. References supporting change: https://www.cwbgolf.org/community-outreach-programme/ Source20 (talk) 06:59, 6 August 2020 (UTC)
- Declined; the content is not sourced to independent sources. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 21:59, 10 September 2020 (UTC)
Information to be added: The Club has established the Community Outreach Programme (COP) in 2003, which aims to serve the neighbourhood and give back to the community. The COP initiatives spin around four major areas, including Family, Neighbourhood, Wellness, and Environment. Collaborating with its charity partners, the Club organises various community and fundraising activities, including charity golf, run and walk; festive luncheons, wellness sessions, lucky bag and free use of Club facilities for the elderly and the underprivileged; reading scheme, child sponsorship, wellness and care programme for the less fortunate students; parent and child workshops and seminars; as well as emergency relief for neighbouring communities. Moreover, the Club has organised charity online concert and online wellness class. In December 2020, the Club held a brand-new online event “The Clearwater Bay Charity Virtual Run & Walk 2020/2021”[1] to encourage members and the community to participate in sports under the pandemic. To support the promotion of sport for disability development, proceeds of this event are all donated to the Hong Kong Network for the Promotion of Inclusive Society, also known as the Fearless Dragons.
Charity partners come from diverse backgrounds, ranging from education-oriented and upholding the well-being of elders, to emergency relief as well as environmental preservation. Major charity partners include but not limited to, Special Olympics Hong Kong, Suicide Prevention Services, Pok Oi Hospital, Christian Action, Haven of Hope Christian Service, St. James’ Settlement, Lifeline Express Foundation, Mother’s Choice, World Vision Hong Kong, Caritas HK and HK Federation of Youth Groups.
Explanation of issue: To clarify again, the Club is a non-profit organisation and has been partnering with a number of local and international partners, charity organisations and NGOS, to contribute community by organising different fund-raising activities through its Community Outreach Programme(COP). In order to make the content more comprehensive, examples of the charity partners and organised events are listed and illustrated. Besides, other local Clubs such as Hong Kong Jockey Club and Hong Kong Golf Club are allowed to include this part in their pages to let the reader to have a fully understanding of the organisation.
References supporting change: https://orientaldaily.on.cc/cnt/sport/20201201/mobile/odn-20201201-1201_00286_008.html ; https://www.scmp.com/yp/report/latest-reports/article/3065733/beginner-golf-experience-clearwater-bay-golf-and-country; https://www.hohcs-etouch.org.hk/loveisintheair2020/ ; https://www.cwbgolf.org/community-outreach-programme/
Source20 (talk) 07:10, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
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Charity partners come from diverse backgrounds, ranging from education-oriented and upholding the well-being of elders, to emergency relief as well as environmental preservation. Major charity partners include but not limited to, Special Olympics Hong Kong, Suicide Prevention Services, Pok Oi Hospital, Christian Action, Haven of Hope Christian Service, St. James’ Settlement, Lifeline Express Foundation, Mother’s Choice, World Vision Hong Kong, Caritas HK and HK Federation of Youth Groups.
- Reason for the change: To clarify again, the Club is a non-profit organisation and has been partnering with a number of local and international partners, charity organisations and NGOS, to contribute community by organising different fund-raising activities through its Community Outreach Programme(COP). In order to make the content more comprehensive, examples of the charity partners and organised events are listed and illustrated. Besides, other local Clubs such as Hong Kong Jockey Club and Hong Kong Golf Club are allowed to include this part in their pages to let the reader to have a fully understanding of the organisation.
- References supporting change: https://orientaldaily.on.cc/cnt/sport/20201201/mobile/odn-20201201-1201_00286_008.html ; https://www.scmp.com/yp/report/latest-reports/article/3065733/beginner-golf-experience-clearwater-bay-golf-and-country; https://www.hohcs-etouch.org.hk/loveisintheair2020/ ; https://www.cwbgolf.org/community-outreach-programme/
Source20 (talk) 07:11, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
Not done: Source20. Muhibm0307 (talk) 09:07, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
References
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To further support the information to be added, here are the local media news links of charity events held by the Club: Oriental Daily News: https://orientaldaily.on.cc/cnt/sport/20201201/mobile/odn-20201201-1201_00286_008.html Sky Post: https://skypost.ulifestyle.com.hk/article/3168016/%E4%BD%B3%E7%AF%80%E9%80%81%E6%9A%96%20%EF%B8%B3%E5%8B%B5%E8%A1%8C%E6%9C%83%E6%B4%BE%E7%99%BC1300%E7%A6%8F%E8%A2%8B%20%E6%BB%BF%E8%BC%89%E8%B3%80%E5%B9%B4%E9%A3%9F%E5%93%81%E7%82%BA%E5%9F%BA%E5%B1%A4%E5%AE%B6%E5%BA%AD%E9%80%81%E6%9A%96 HK01: https://www.hk01.com/%E5%8D%B3%E6%99%82%E9%AB%94%E8%82%B2/648385/%E6%B8%85%E6%B0%B4%E7%81%A3%E7%96%AB%E6%83%85%E4%B8%8B%E7%B7%9A%E4%B8%8A%E6%B4%BB%E5%8B%95%E7%B1%8C%E6%AC%BE%E5%9B%9E%E9%A5%8B%E7%A4%BE%E6%9C%83-%E5%A0%85%E6%8C%81%E7%A7%89%E8%A1%8C%E6%9C%8D%E5%8B%99%E6%89%BF%E8%AB%BE%E5%9B%9E%E9%A5%8B%E5%A4%A7%E7%9C%BE Sportroad: https://www.sportsroad.hk/archives/136834 Source20 (talk) 07:02, 11 February 2022 (UTC)
Accolades (Recent)
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Information to be added: Golf course • Golf Digest – The Best Courses in Every Country • Cloud Golf - Asia-Pacific Top 100 Golf Courses 2019 – 2020 • Rolex – Top 1,000 Golf Courses 2010 Private club • The Hong Kong Tatler – 10 of the Most Exclusive Private Members’ Clubs in Hong Kong • Platinum Clubs of the World - Top 50 Platinum Clubs of Asia-Pacific Sustainability/environment • Environmental Campaign Committee - Hong Kong Awards for Environmental Excellence 2019 Explanation of issue: The Club has received quite a number of accolades locally and internationally. It is suggested to include this section because the Club is kind of a representative of Hong Kong. It is not trying to promote the Club, instead, the information is fact and evidence to prove the quality of the Club and its golf courses. References supporting change: https://clubleadersforum.com/pcow/platinum-clubs-2020-asia-pacific/ Source20 (talk) 07:00, 6 August 2020 (UTC)
- Declined, this is spammy and poorly-written to boot. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 21:58, 10 September 2020 (UTC)
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This is a new section and the information to be added: Golf course • Golf Digest – The Best Courses in Every Country • Cloud Golf - Asia-Pacific Top 100 Golf Courses2019 – 2020 • Rolex – Top 1,000 Golf Courses 2010 Private club • The Hong Kong Tatler – 10 of the Most Exclusive Private Members’ Clubs in Hong Kong • Platinum Clubs of the World - Top 50 Platinum Clubs of Asia-Pacific Sustainability/environment • Environmental Campaign Committee - Hong Kong Awards for Environmental Excellence 2019 Caring company • The Hong Kong Council of Social Service – Caring Company 15 Years Plus 2014 – 2019 • The Hong Kong General Chamber of Small and Medium Business Limited – Partner Employer Award (Since 2013) Explanation of issue: These are the factual statements/accolades which the Club awarded. References supporting change: https://clubleadersforum.com/pcow/platinum-clubs-2020-asia-pacific/ ; https://zh-tw.facebook.com/golfwriter/photos/pcb.3939550492756095/3939542396090238/?type=3&theater (news published on Sing Tao Daily on 19 Feb 2021) Source20 (talk) 07:26, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
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Sustainability/environment", "Environmental Campaign Committee - Hong Kong Awards for Environmental Excellence 2019", "The Hong Kong Council of Social Service – Caring Company 15 Years Plus 2014 – 2019" and "The Hong Kong General Chamber of Small and Medium Business Limited – Partner Employer Award (Since 2013)".
- Reason for the change: These are the factual statements/locally and internationally accolades which the Club awarded. The reason of adding this new section since the Club is representing Hong Kong in terms of golf-related sector. These are not the promotional materials, instead, they are facts and evidences to verify the quality of the Club and its golf courses.
- References supporting change: https://clubleadersforum.com/pcow/platinum-clubs-2020-asia-pacific/ ; https://zh-tw.facebook.com/golfwriter/photos/pcb.3939550492756095/3939542396090238/?type=3&theater (news published on Sing Tao Daily on 19 Feb 2021)
Source20 (talk) 07:22, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
- Not done: Seems highly promotional with highly unnotable awards with unreliable sources. Heart (talk) 03:54, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
Chinese name
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Information to be added or removed: the Chinese name should be "清水灣鄉村俱樂部" Explanation of issue: the Chinese name of the club is wrong. References supporting change: http://www.oogolf.com/courseinfo/Hongkong/Clearwater%20Bay%20Golf.html Source20 (talk) 07:20, 6 August 2020 (UTC)
Hello editors, Much appreciate if you can review and handle my suggestion. Many thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Source20 (talk • contribs) 09:59, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
To avoid further misunderstanding, I edited by myself.
- @Source20: Confirmed edited by COI editor in this edit. Factual, non controversial fact, such as chinese name etc, can be directly edited by yourself.--Justanothersgwikieditor (talk) 09:02, 2 September 2020 (UTC)