Talk:Climate Change Denial Disorder/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:44, 7 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• The "alt" parameter should be a description of the above image, not just the title of the film; please change it accordingly
• The "caption" parameter's statement is grammatically incorrect; reword it to "The film shows symptoms of a fictional disease."
• Remove any unused parameters that will always remain unused please

Lead

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• "comprehend words related to climate change included "factual" and "melting"." --> "comprehend words related to climate change including "factual" and "melting"."

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• "Environmental news website EcoWatch highlighted the film among the highest viewed environmental videos of 2015.[7]" --> "Environmental news website EcoWatch highlighted the film among the most viewed environmental videos of 2015.[7]"

Production

• The double-photo box is quite large and takes up over half the width of the article; could you reduce it and size it down a bit?
• Rest is great! :)

Plot

• Flawless

Awards and recognition

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• "with a nomination in the 2015..." --> "with a nomination at the 2015..."
• "Other nominees in the category included films The Soil Story and Dear Future Generations: Sorry.[6][14] Dear Future Generations: Sorry by Prince Ea went on to win in the Best Digital Short category that year at the Environmental Media Awards held October 24, 2015 at Warner Bros. Studios in Burbank, California.[15]" --> "Other nominees in the category included films The Soil Story and Dear Future Generations: Sorry,[6][14] with the latter going on to win the award on October 24, 2015 at Warner Bros. Studios in Burbank, California.[15]" (Reduction of redundant information.)

Reception

• Nada enchilada, great work!

End of GA Review:

Great work! Just some great fixes and we'll both be on our way! Thanks for the review and @PING me here please with any questions, comments, or concerns. Once again, great work! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 22:27, 21 June 2016 (UTC).

I have noticed the user who nominated this article has been away from Wikipedia for over two months, so he/she will likely not get around this. Since it's been seven days as of today, I will be failing the article due to inactivity. Please re–nominate this article when you get a chance as it is quite good. Thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 22:27, 28 June 2016 (UTC).