Talk:Climate change in Austria
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Updating this article
editHello, we are a group of students from the course Ecolocical Effects of Climate Changes at Uppsala University. As an assignment for our course, we plan on updating this article and including more information to be in line with the Structure for ‘Climate change in country X’-articles proposed here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Climate_change/Style_guide. As we are still in a learning process while doing this, we welcome any help and feedback.
Edit: We have finished our draft now and will publish the redesigned page in the next days. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mayr099 (talk • contribs) 13:29, 17 May 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for adding so much new info to this article - I especially liked that you have added more on transportation and politics. I have requested a copyedit Wikipedia:WikiProject_Guild_of_Copy_Editors/Requests#May_2022 but this is normal not at all a criticism. Chidgk1 (talk) 15:47, 22 May 2022 (UTC)
- Hi, thanks for this work. Please add your user names when you comment here so that we know who you are. I am assuming one of you is User:Mayr099. I've made some quick changes to the structure (too many sub-heading 1 levels, I felt). Also corrected typos, took out external links in the image captions. I added a section on "mitigation" which is important. You already had content about mitigation but hadn't included a section heading with this title. If you still have time, could you make the lead into a better summary of the article? It should be around 400 to 600 words long (4 paragraphs) and be a good summary. Also, perhaps you could use excerpts for the topics on energy and transport like the other students did at climate change in Italy? Again, thanks for your valuable contributions here! EMsmile (talk) 10:23, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you for the edits and the positive feedback! We did not consider the articles about transportation and energy in Austria as very detailed and fitting for excerpts therefore we did not use that option. If we find the time after our exam period we can have a look at the lead section again. Mayr099 (talk) 08:27, 27 May 2022 (UTC)
- Hi, thanks for this work. Please add your user names when you comment here so that we know who you are. I am assuming one of you is User:Mayr099. I've made some quick changes to the structure (too many sub-heading 1 levels, I felt). Also corrected typos, took out external links in the image captions. I added a section on "mitigation" which is important. You already had content about mitigation but hadn't included a section heading with this title. If you still have time, could you make the lead into a better summary of the article? It should be around 400 to 600 words long (4 paragraphs) and be a good summary. Also, perhaps you could use excerpts for the topics on energy and transport like the other students did at climate change in Italy? Again, thanks for your valuable contributions here! EMsmile (talk) 10:23, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
Checking the German cites
editEMsmile - as a German speaker if you have time could you possibly check a few of the German language cites? For example I changed about the subtropical high https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Climate_change_in_Austria&type=revision&diff=1090776324&oldid=1090775931 but not completely certain I got it right. Chidgk1 (talk) 09:09, 31 May 2022 (UTC)