Talk:Cocoto Magic Circus

A LOT OF THINGS

Ok, Severe changes need to be made to this article, I will try to help as much as I can with these. First of all, Sources, We need sources of all information provided on this game.

2. Name. The article name is Cocoto Magic Circus, Either rename the article to Cocoto Funfair, or change the head to "Cocoto Magic Circus also known as Cocoto Funfair in the EU".

3. You say this game was only listed in the pal region, but then you later list other regions that it was sold in. This game was not only sold in the pal region, you could add a Note to the bottom saying "the PS2 Version of this game was only sold in Europe".

4. Sections. Please use the proper section formats in articles. Not just subheadings.

5. No story is mentioned and yet the game features an antagonist? Please add a section on plot if available.

6. "Free fairy: This minigame involves shooting enemies into the thing that will help release fairy." Please specify, do not just say "the thing".

7. The article is defined as a "Kart Racer", "Platform Jumper", and "Fishing Master", All of which do not apply as far as the context of the article.

8. "Boz: The lanky creature who dresses up as various different sexualities to confuse the friends he does't have". "Confuse the friends he doesnt have"? Well you've confused me alright, with that sentance. I do not understand what you mean by that. Also "Dresses up as various different sexualities", did you mean Genders? Sexuality is a sexual preference.

9. General Lack of Content, I would advise adding citations, Reception, Notes, Story/Plot, and Characters sections.

Final Thoughts. This article needs a lot of work, I will try to fix it as much as I can. PerryPerryD 02:11, 12 March 2022 (UTC)