Talk:Cokethorpe School
Latest comment: 1 month ago by Zalewo in topic Notes on Improvements on this Page
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Notes on Improvements on this Page
editFirstly, the History section could be written to flow more smoothly, it just feels sort of clunky, but I don't know, it might just be me. Something about how this page is written doesn't feel like it should be; maybe the tone, or the writing style.
I can't edit the page, but there are many small grammar mistakes, for example, in the first paragraph in History, a comma should be added after the word 'March'.
Lastly, on Notable Former Pupils, the 'F' and 'P' should be capitalized, and maybe needs citations or sources. Zalewo (talk) 17:24, 9 October 2024 (UTC)