Talk:Colleges of the University of Santo Tomas/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ArnabSaha (talk · contribs) 18:43, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

• Article has grammatical, spelling etc. issues. Request for copyedit at WP:GOCE.
• Multiple MoS issues. Some words in "Types of college" are in bold unnecessarily. Citations aren't formatted properly
• Try to avoid single line paras WP:PARA
• Lack of references. Many parts are unsourced. "Types of college" section, the whole "Roll call" section do not have any citations. ("Various faculties on...", "College of Science retained...", "The Alfredo M. Velayo College of Accountancy became...", "In university events, like..." all unsourced)
• "are considered to be ..." - considered by whom?
• Some info mentioned in the lead, not mentioned in body. Lead is the summary of everything in the body. Also, no need to add citations in lead as per WP:CITELEAD
• Add some more prose to the article. As of now, its mainly based on the table and the year-wise chart
• If available, add some images
• Overall the article has comprehensiveness issue.

When these issues are addressed, the article can be renominated. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to have it reassessed. Thank you for your work so far.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  06:26, 11 July 2021 (UTC)