Talk:Cologne–Düsseldorf rivalry/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Buidhe (talk · contribs) 01:51, 6 March 2021 (UTC)

The article has some issues which prevent it from meeting the GA criteria. For instance, much of the content lacks a source.

Awkward phrasings, minor POV phrasings, and grammar errors are common:

• "the British Adele"
• "You can also buy a "Kölsch" key for your computer keyboard in Cologne to exchange it for the Alt key"
• "Its transformation into elegant promenades"
• "Johann Cornelius Bergrath, contradicted an advertisement in the Kölnischer Stadtboten"
• "Düsseldorf painter Peter Janssen the Elder created a catchy image for the founding myth of the city of Düsseldorf"
• "This rivalry, although celebrated as "enmity" folkloristic on a sporting and cultural level, is based on historical and economic facts."

Article has german-language text. It shouldn't, see MOS:FOREIGNQUOTE. (t · c) buidhe 01:51, 6 March 2021 (UTC)

Buidhe, thanks for the review although I would appreciate at least a ping if you have reviewed my GA nomination. Secondly it is very clear that an article about a rivalry of two german cities has german language in it, MOS:FOREIGNQUOTE seem somewhat awkward - anyway it needs a CE indeed. CommanderWaterford (talk) 11:09, 20 March 2021 (UTC)