Talk:Coming Through Slaughter

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Gyrofrog in topic Style

Style

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This article is written in really poor style. It reads like someone's disorganized notes. I've not read the novel myself; perhaps someone who has can organize this a little? Kedwar5 (talk) 05:41, 18 September 2012 (UTC)Reply

I agree, it wasn't written like an article. I've deleted the notes (as you described them). I think we're better off without the text than having it the way it was. -- Gyrofrog (talk) 17:38, 8 December 2016 (UTC)Reply