Talk:Comprehensive Soldier and Family Fitness

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September 2010

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This article directly copies material from a website operated by the United States Army. As a government-run website, it is not subject to copyright laws. - Realkyhick (Talk to me) 03:49, 7 September 2010 (UTC)Reply

This article no longer directly copies all of its material from a website operated by the United States Army. -Aaron Wayne O'Donahue 7:00 AM, January, 6, 2011 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aaronwayneodonahue (talkcontribs) 13:00, 6 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

POV - October 2012

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The "Criticism" section has a lot of direct criticism using a biased tone, all outside of direct quotations. Specific examples:

* "however, the spiritual fitness initiatives are now being promoted as though they were secular initiatives"
* "These centers are often only subtle modifications of existing chapels"
* "The Army has done little to address the criticisms of the CSF program"

It seems to me that these are opinions masquerading as facts; the citation at the end of a sentence doesn't change our responsibility to maintain a neutral tone.

Lloannna (talk) 22:10, 30 October 2012 (UTC)Reply

This page was badly in need of updating. Over the course of 2012-13, CSF2 changed directors, changed its name, had its mission expanded through the promulgation of an Army Regulation, and launched several new initiatives. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brian.b.feeney (talkcontribs) 17:11, 13 November 2013 (UTC)Reply

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