Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 27 August 2019 and 14 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ekinner.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 18:16, 16 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

پری ما Hamedjlalynzhad (talk) 00:21, 29 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Intro sentences and ACM quote?

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The first few sentences of this article are a close paraphrase of the ACM Block quote in the "definition" section immediately following. To have nearly identical text twice in a row, once quoted and once not, feels jarring and redundant. I'm not sure exactly how to fix this. Is there a problem with just using the ACM quote to start the article, but adding wikilinks to the topics? Otherwise I'd say just rewrite those first few sentences from scratch. They can probably be clearer and shorter anyway. Emeraldemon (talk) 20:06, 21 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Emeraldemon:, we can do better than this! And should. I'll have a go. yoyo (talk) 19:49, 5 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
@Emeraldemon:, done. yoyo (talk) 20:07, 5 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
Thanks, looks better.Emeraldemon (talk) 23:01, 5 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
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That section's first sentence contained a link to the Absolute (philosophy) article, when the topic is actually computer connection. That seems like quite a logical jump to me. I think a link to Computer network would be much more appropriate. I changed it.

Please sign your comments on talk pages, using four tildes, thus: ~~~~. Thanks! yoyo (talk) 19:52, 5 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Broken Cite

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Note 2 has a dead link: https://cc2020.nsparc.msstate.edu/wp-content/uploads/2020/11/15September2020-CC2020-Report-v43.pdf — Preceding unsigned comment added by Qucchia (talkcontribs) 17:41, 6 December 2021 (UTC)Reply

Networks, telegraph and radio signals, and bad weather like cloud interfearance

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We know telegraph networks exist from late 16th or early 17th century, and also radio is included in communications in late 19th century, but it is expected ot have very strong signaling because bad weather interferes to the connectivity, I think this obstructive to modern technology ideas for clouds should be forbidden. Editech24463 (talk) 09:46, 27 July 2022 (UTC)Reply

Life orientation

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About technical jobs 41.116.103.51 (talk) 12:47, 21 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

Pls try to comment here I'm doing a school assignment 41.116.103.51 (talk) 12:48, 21 April 2024 (UTC)Reply