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Diacetyl request

Latest comment: 1 year ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Hi editors, I had a request for the Diacetyl section. It seems to me that most of the content there isn't really related to Conagra, so I suggest trimming it down to keep the content focused on Conagra. Here's what I'm thinking:

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On September 4, 2007, the [[Flavor and Extract Manufacturers Association]] recommended reduction of [[diacetyl]] in butter-like flavorings, such as those used in popcorn, due to cases of the potentially fatal disease [[bronchiolitis obliterans]] or "Popcorn Workers's Lung" appearing among plant workers exposed to diacetyl fumes, as well as in one case that involved a popcorn consumer. The next day ConAgra Foods announced that it would soon remove diacetyl from its [[Jiffy Pop]] and [[Orville Redenbacher's]] popcorn products.
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In 2007, ConAgra removed [[diacetyl]] from its microwave popcorn recipes following reports that the compound was linked to cases of [[Bronchiolitis obliterans]].

References

  1. ^ "ConAgra to drop popcorn chemical linked to lung ailment". USA Today. Associated Press. September 5, 2007.
  2. ^ "'Popcorn lung' chemical gone from most recipes". NBC News. Associated Press. December 17, 2007. Retrieved October 2, 2023.

I think this keeps the content more focused on Conagra itself and changes the source to confirm that the changes did in fact happen, rather than just saying an announcement was made. Please let me know what you think! RWConagra (talk) 21:33, 2 October 2023 (UTC) Arjayay (talk) 21:44, 2 October 2023 (UTC)

  Declined The text as it now exists in the article is much clearer in discussing the information than the requested prose is. Regards,  Spintendo  23:04, 2 October 2023 (UTC)
Thanks for taking a look! Also thanks to Arjayay and Dialectric for fixing my error. RWConagra (talk) 20:33, 4 October 2023 (UTC)

2000s request 3

Latest comment: 1 year ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Hi editors, I had another request to make updates to the 2000–2015 section. For this request, I suggest significantly expanding the third paragraph, which is currently a single sentence.

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In 2007, ConAgra acquired [[Watts Brothers Farms]], a vegetable processing and agricultural operation, including an organic dairy.
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In the latter half of the 2000s and into the 2010s, ConAgra began acquiring more companies as it shifted its focus to packaged foods. ConAgra purchased Watts Brothers Farms from [[Don Watts (farmer)|Don Watts]] to bolster its Lamb Weston division in 2008 and purchased [[Ralcorp]] in 2012. Also in 2012, the company joined with PepsiCo, [[Walmart]] and approximately 20 other food firms to defeat [[2012 California Proposition 37|Proposition 37]], a California [[ballot measure]] which would have mandated the labeling of genetically modified foods. In 2014, ConAgra acquired TaiMei Potato Industry Limited, an [[Inner Mongolia|Inner Mongolian]] potato processor, to further bolster Lamb Weston. ConAgra sold Ralcorp to [[TreeHouse Foods]] for $2.7 billion in 2015 and purchased Blake's All Natural Foods the same year. ConAgra spun off Lamb Weston into an independent company in 2016.

Rendered, the new paragraph looks like this:

In the latter half of the 2000s and into the 2010s, ConAgra began acquiring more companies as it shifted its focus to packaged foods. ConAgra purchased Watts Brothers Farms from Don Watts to bolster its Lamb Weston division in 2008 and purchased Ralcorp in 2012.[4][5] Also in 2012, the company joined with PepsiCo, Nestlé and other food firms to defeat Proposition 37, a California ballot measure which would have mandated the labeling of genetically modified foods.[11] The following year, Conagra joined with Walmart and approximately 20 other companies to seek the establishment of national labeling standards for genetically modified foods.[6] In 2014, ConAgra acquired TaiMei Potato Industry Limited, an Inner Mongolian potato processor, to further bolster Lamb Weston.[7] ConAgra sold Ralcorp to TreeHouse Foods for $2.7 billion in 2015 and purchased Blake's All Natural Foods the same year.[8][9] ConAgra spun off Lamb Weston into an independent company in 2016.[10]

References

  1. ^ "REFILE-ConAgra buys vegetable processing company". Reuters. February 25, 2008. Retrieved November 3, 2022.
  2. ^ Gilblom, Kelly (March 21, 2010). "JA Laureate: Don Watts". www.bizjournals.com. Retrieved November 3, 2022.
  3. ^ "ConAgra adds Watts Brothers to food empire". East Oregonian. March 2, 2008. Retrieved November 3, 2022.
  4. ^ a b "ConAgra adds Watts Brothers to food empire". East Oregonian. March 2, 2008. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  5. ^ a b "ConAgra Foods to make big purchase". KTVO. Associated Press. November 27, 2012. Archived from the original on November 29, 2012. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  6. ^ a b Strom, Stephanie (January 31, 2013). "Genetic Changes to Food May Get Uniform Labeling". The New York Times. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  7. ^ a b "ConAgra Foods Acquires Chinese Potato Processor TaiMei Potato Industry Limited". MarketWatch. July 14, 2014. Archived from the original on June 28, 2017. Retrieved January 20, 2023.
  8. ^ a b Picker, Leslie (November 2, 2015). "ConAgra Sells Private-Label Business for $2.7 Billion". The New York Times. Retrieved January 26, 2023.
  9. ^ a b Chen, Angela (May 12, 2015). "ConAgra Buys Blake's All Natural Foods". The Wall Street Journal. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  10. ^ a b "Conagra Brands completes Lamb Weston spinoff, name change". Associated Press. November 10, 2016. Retrieved January 30, 2023.
  11. ^ Strom, Stephanie (September 13, 2012). "Uneasy Allies in the Grocery Aisle". The New York Times. Retrieved March 21, 2023.

This is pretty much a total overhaul of what that paragraph was. It adds more content related to acquisitions and sales during the late 00s and early 10s. It also adds sentences related to Prop. 37 and GMO labeling as fits within the timeline.

Please let me know what you think and if you have any questions! RWConagra (talk) 20:33, 4 October 2023 (UTC)

  Declined (See WP:INTEGRITY.)
  1. The proposed text ConAgra purchased Watts Brothers Farms from Don Watts to bolster its Lamb Weston division in 2008 and purchased Ralcorp in 2012.[4][5] is not cited correctly. Citation 4 is dated 2008, yet it is placed at the end of a sentence containing information that occurred in 2012.
  2. The proposed text ConAgra sold Ralcorp to TreeHouse Foods for $2.7 billion in 2015 and purchased Blake's All Natural Foods the same year.[8][9] is not cited correctly. Citation 8 says nothing about Blake's All Natural Foods, yet it is placed at the end of the sentence which contains that claim.
Regards,  Spintendo  21:17, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
Thanks for looking! I will fix that in a new request. RWConagra (talk) 19:34, 5 October 2023 (UTC)

References

2000s request 3 source placement update

Latest comment: 1 year ago5 comments2 people in discussion

Hi editors, I am back with updated source placement per the last comment on a previous request. This request is to replace the current third paragraph of the 2000–2015 section with new text that further expands on events during the mid 00s and early 2010s.

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In 2007, ConAgra acquired [[Watts Brothers Farms]], a vegetable processing and agricultural operation, including an organic dairy.
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In the latter half of the 2000s and into the 2010s, ConAgra began acquiring more companies as it shifted its focus to packaged foods. ConAgra purchased Watts Brothers Farms from [[Don Watts (farmer)|Don Watts]] to bolster its Lamb Weston division in 2008 and purchased [[Ralcorp]] in 2012. Also in 2012, the company joined with PepsiCo, [[Walmart]] and approximately 20 other food firms to defeat [[2012 California Proposition 37|Proposition 37]], a California [[ballot measure]] which would have mandated the labeling of genetically modified foods. In 2014, ConAgra acquired TaiMei Potato Industry Limited, an [[Inner Mongolia|Inner Mongolian]] potato processor, to further bolster Lamb Weston. ConAgra sold Ralcorp to [[TreeHouse Foods]] for $2.7 billion in 2015 and purchased Blake's All Natural Foods the same year. ConAgra spun off Lamb Weston into an independent company in 2016.

Rendered, the new paragraph looks like this:

In the latter half of the 2000s and into the 2010s, ConAgra began acquiring more companies as it shifted its focus to packaged foods. ConAgra purchased Watts Brothers Farms from Don Watts to bolster its Lamb Weston division in 2008[4] and purchased Ralcorp in 2012.[5] Also in 2012, the company joined with PepsiCo, Nestlé and other food firms to defeat Proposition 37, a California ballot measure which would have mandated the labeling of genetically modified foods.[11] The following year, Conagra joined with Walmart and approximately 20 other companies to seek the establishment of national labeling standards for genetically modified foods.[6] In 2014, ConAgra acquired TaiMei Potato Industry Limited, an Inner Mongolian potato processor, to further bolster Lamb Weston.[7] ConAgra sold Ralcorp to TreeHouse Foods for $2.7 billion in 2015[8] and purchased Blake's All Natural Foods the same year.[9] ConAgra spun off Lamb Weston into an independent company in 2016.[10]

References

  1. ^ "REFILE-ConAgra buys vegetable processing company". Reuters. February 25, 2008. Retrieved November 3, 2022.
  2. ^ Gilblom, Kelly (March 21, 2010). "JA Laureate: Don Watts". www.bizjournals.com. Retrieved November 3, 2022.
  3. ^ "ConAgra adds Watts Brothers to food empire". East Oregonian. March 2, 2008. Retrieved November 3, 2022.
  4. ^ a b "ConAgra adds Watts Brothers to food empire". East Oregonian. March 2, 2008. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  5. ^ a b "ConAgra Foods to make big purchase". KTVO. Associated Press. November 27, 2012. Archived from the original on November 29, 2012. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  6. ^ a b Strom, Stephanie (January 31, 2013). "Genetic Changes to Food May Get Uniform Labeling". The New York Times. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  7. ^ a b "ConAgra Foods Acquires Chinese Potato Processor TaiMei Potato Industry Limited". MarketWatch. July 14, 2014. Archived from the original on June 28, 2017. Retrieved January 20, 2023.
  8. ^ a b Picker, Leslie (November 2, 2015). "ConAgra Sells Private-Label Business for $2.7 Billion". The New York Times. Retrieved January 26, 2023.
  9. ^ a b Chen, Angela (May 12, 2015). "ConAgra Buys Blake's All Natural Foods". The Wall Street Journal. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  10. ^ a b "Conagra Brands completes Lamb Weston spinoff, name change". Associated Press. November 10, 2016. Retrieved January 30, 2023.
  11. ^ Strom, Stephanie (September 13, 2012). "Uneasy Allies in the Grocery Aisle". The New York Times. Retrieved March 21, 2023.

That should meet WP:INTEGRITY. Please let me know what you think and if you have any questions! RWConagra (talk) 19:34, 5 October 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for correcting the integrity issues, I see no more concerns there. However, there is a word that is used in the request twice, the word "bolster". This is a subjective word with unclear meaning and purpose. I would prefer that another word and/or an enhanced explanation covering whatever intent you're wishing to convey in the two sentences which currently use this word. Please advise. Regards,  Spintendo  18:28, 6 October 2023 (UTC)
Sure, I think "grow" conveys the same meaning in this context. The acquisitions in both instances made Lamb Weston larger, so "grow" works as well. It would look like this (bold added):
In the latter half of the 2000s and into the 2010s, ConAgra began acquiring more companies as it shifted its focus to packaged foods. ConAgra purchased Watts Brothers Farms from Don Watts to grow its Lamb Weston division in 2008[1] and purchased Ralcorp in 2012.[2] Also in 2012, the company joined with PepsiCo, Nestlé and other food firms to defeat Proposition 37, a California ballot measure which would have mandated the labeling of genetically modified foods.[3] The following year, Conagra joined with Walmart and approximately 20 other companies to seek the establishment of national labeling standards for genetically modified foods.[4] In 2014, ConAgra acquired TaiMei Potato Industry Limited, an Inner Mongolian potato processor, to further grow Lamb Weston.[5] ConAgra sold Ralcorp to TreeHouse Foods for $2.7 billion in 2015[6] and purchased Blake's All Natural Foods the same year.[7] ConAgra spun off Lamb Weston into an independent company in 2016.[8]

References

  1. ^ "ConAgra adds Watts Brothers to food empire". East Oregonian. March 2, 2008. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  2. ^ "ConAgra Foods to make big purchase". KTVO. Associated Press. November 27, 2012. Archived from the original on November 29, 2012. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  3. ^ Strom, Stephanie (September 13, 2012). "Uneasy Allies in the Grocery Aisle". The New York Times. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  4. ^ Strom, Stephanie (January 31, 2013). "Genetic Changes to Food May Get Uniform Labeling". The New York Times. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  5. ^ "ConAgra Foods Acquires Chinese Potato Processor TaiMei Potato Industry Limited". MarketWatch. July 14, 2014. Archived from the original on June 28, 2017. Retrieved January 20, 2023.
  6. ^ Picker, Leslie (November 2, 2015). "ConAgra Sells Private-Label Business for $2.7 Billion". The New York Times. Retrieved January 26, 2023.
  7. ^ Chen, Angela (May 12, 2015). "ConAgra Buys Blake's All Natural Foods". The Wall Street Journal. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  8. ^ "Conagra Brands completes Lamb Weston spinoff, name change". Associated Press. November 10, 2016. Retrieved January 30, 2023.

Let me know what you think of that! RWConagra (talk) 16:11, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

Reply 10-OCT-2023

   Edit request implemented  

  • Commentary-type text such as that discussing "growth" and "bolstering" was omitted entirely.

Regards,  Spintendo  23:48, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

That works for me, thanks for making the change! RWConagra (talk) 20:46, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

Genetically modified foods request

Latest comment: 1 year ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Hi editors, for my next request I ask that we remove the Genetically modified foods section. The section is now redundant with the recent changes made to the 2000–2015 section, as the same information is now in the first and third paragraphs, albeit summarized a bit to keep it more on topic. It also seems that having that content in a separate section goes against the spirit of WP:STRUCTURE, which says that "Segregation of text or other content into different regions or subsections, based solely on the apparent POV of the content itself, may result in an unencyclopedic structure" and that editors should "Try to achieve a more neutral text by folding debates into the narrative, rather than isolating them into sections that ignore or fight against each other."

With the way content has been placed into the 2000–2015 section, it has been effectively folded into the narrative and better meets the ideal set forth by WP:STRUCTURE than the current article structure. Can we remove the Genetically modified foods section?

Please let me know what you think! As always because of my COI I won't make that change myself. RWConagra (talk) 20:46, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

Reply 11-OCT-2023

Unfortunately, I can't take your word for it that the text has been "folded" into other sections. I'm going to need to see proof from the article that this has occurred. This can be done by submitting a request which has been broken into two portions: one section showing the text from the proposed deleted portion, and the other section showing where that text has been emplaced/summarized elsewhere within the article, as shown below:

COMPARISON OF TEXTS
Text as it appears now in the
Proposed deleted section 		Text as it now appears and/or is summarized in
Other sections
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The COI editor is asked to submit an edit request which calls attention to the sections of text within the existing article that, because they exist, justify the removal of the section in question. Please note that I am aware that certain sections aren't repeated verbatim because of paraphrasing changes that may have been made. The COI editor stated in their request "the same information is now in the first and third paragraphs, albeit summarized a bit to keep it more on topic." The reviewer is asking to see proof of those sections and summarizations shown here on the talk page before anything is deleted as per the request. Please open a new edit request which supplies this proof at your earliest convenience when ready to proceed. Regards,  Spintendo  21:30, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

Sure, simple enough! RWConagra (talk) 19:40, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Updated Genetically modified foods request

Latest comment: 1 year ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Hi editors, I'm back with the request for the Genetically modified foods section with the table as requested by Spintendo. In short, this request is to delete the Genetically modified foods section as it is now redundant after recent changes were made to other portions of the article and the remaining section has some significant problems related to verifiability. The table comparing the section to the text in the 2000–2015 section is below.

COMPARISON OF TEXTS
Text as it appears now in the proposed to be deleted
Genetically modified foods section 		Text as it now appears and/or is summarized in
2000–2015: From meatpacking to packaged goods
In 2002, Conagra and other major food and beverage companies including PepsiCo, General Mills, Kelloggs, Sara Lee, and H. J. Heinz Co. spent millions to defeat Oregon Ballot Measure 27, which would have required food companies to label products that contain genetically modified ingredients.[1] According to the Oregon Secretary of State, ConAgra contributed $71,000 to the campaign to defeat the state ballot initiative.[2] ConAgra rebranded as ConAgra Foods in 2000.[3] The first half of the ensuing decade was marked by the sale of the company's fresh and refrigerated meat units, beginning with the sale of its majority stake in Swift & Company to Hicks, Muse, Tate & Furst and Booth Creek Management in 2002. The Swift sale ended ConAgra's involvement in the fresh beef and pork industries.[4] The same year, ConAgra joined a coalition of food producers and trade associations, including PepsiCo, General Mills, and CropLife International to defeat Oregon Ballot Measure 27, which would have required the labeling of genetically modified food in the state.[5]
Throughout 2012, ConAgra contributed $1,176,700 to a $46 million political campaign known as the Coalition Against the Costly Food Labeling Proposition, sponsored by food producers.[6] The organization's goal was to oppose the California citizen's initiative, known as Proposition 37, demanding mandatory labeling of foods containing genetically modified ingredients.

Although the proposition was defeated, there was strong consumer backlash against the coalition's opposition. Consumer advocates encouraged nationwide boycotts of coalition members, and movements were started in several other states to enact similar labeling requirements. As a result, ConAgra and others in the Coalition met with Walmart (the largest food retailer in the U.S.) to seek a nationwide labeling system for genetically modified foods, instead of trying to defeat the measures in every state.[7]

In 2008, ConAgra purchased Watts Brothers Farms from Don Watts[8] and purchased Ralcorp in 2012.[9] Also in 2012, the company joined with PepsiCo, Nestlé and other food firms to defeat Proposition 37, a California ballot measure which would have mandated the labeling of genetically modified foods.[10] The following year, Conagra joined with Walmart and approximately 20 other companies to seek the establishment of national labeling standards for genetically modified foods.[11] In 2014, ConAgra acquired TaiMei Potato Industry Limited, an Inner Mongolian potato processor.[12] ConAgra sold Ralcorp to TreeHouse Foods for $2.7 billion in 2015[13] and purchased Blake's All Natural Foods the same year.[14] ConAgra spun off Lamb Weston into an independent company in 2016.[15]

References

  1. ^ Callahan, Patricia (October 3, 2002). "Food industry campaigns against Oregon labeling proposal". The Wall Street Journal. CropChoice News.
  2. ^ "Responsible Shopper Profile: Conagra Foods". Green America. Retrieved October 1, 2015.
  3. ^ "Key dates in Conagra Brands' 100-year history". Omaha World Herald. October 6, 2019. Retrieved March 22, 2023. 2000: ConAgra Inc. becomes ConAgra Foods Inc.
  4. ^ Jackson, Bill (November 26, 2002). "ConAgra beef sold". Greeley Tribune. Retrieved March 24, 2023.
  5. ^ Callahan, Patricia (September 30, 2002). "Food Industry Is Campaigning Against Oregon GMO Proposal". The Wall Street Journal. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  6. ^ "Who's Funding Prop 37, Labeling for Genetically Engineered Foods?". KCET News. Retrieved December 29, 2017.
  7. ^ Strom, Stephanie (January 31, 2013). "Genetic Changes to Food May Get Uniform Labeling". The New York Times. Archived from the original on February 7, 2013. Retrieved March 29, 2013.
  8. ^ "ConAgra adds Watts Brothers to food empire". East Oregonian. March 2, 2008. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  9. ^ "ConAgra Foods to make big purchase". KTVO. Associated Press. November 27, 2012. Archived from the original on November 29, 2012. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  10. ^ Strom, Stephanie (September 13, 2012). "Uneasy Allies in the Grocery Aisle". The New York Times. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  11. ^ Strom, Stephanie (January 31, 2013). "Genetic Changes to Food May Get Uniform Labeling". The New York Times. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  12. ^ "ConAgra Foods Acquires Chinese Potato Processor TaiMei Potato Industry Limited". MarketWatch. July 14, 2014. Archived from the original on June 28, 2017. Retrieved January 20, 2023.
  13. ^ Picker, Leslie (November 2, 2015). "ConAgra Sells Private-Label Business for $2.7 Billion". The New York Times. Retrieved January 26, 2023.
  14. ^ Chen, Angela (May 12, 2015). "ConAgra Buys Blake's All Natural Foods". The Wall Street Journal. Retrieved March 21, 2023.
  15. ^ "Conagra Brands completes Lamb Weston spinoff, name change". Associated Press. November 10, 2016. Retrieved January 30, 2023.

I think it's also worth noting that the current Genetically modified foods section has some significant issues.

  • None of the snapshots (1, 2, 3) around the time source 58 in the live article was retrieved say anything about a donation, so that sentence is not verified by sourcing
  • Source 59 in the live article does not mention Conagra at all. The paragraph beginning with "Throughout 2012" is not verified by sourcing
  • Source 60 in the live article does not directly support several of the assertions made:
    • "strong consumer backlash" – not supported by the source, arguably could be considered original research
    • "consumer advocates encouraged nationwide boycotts" – the source doesn't say this, only that boycotts happened
    • "movements were started in several other states to enact similar labeling requirements" – the source doesn't say this, only that there were proposals being discussed in about 20 states. I'd also argue that "movements" in this context is non-neutral wording
    • "As a result, ConAgra and others in the Coalition" – the source does not say anything about membership in the Coalition being referred to here. Coalition membership in relation to this ballot measure is also unsupported as noted in relation to Source 59
    • "instead of trying to defeat the measures in every state." – the source does not say this, and mentions no plans to try to defeat ballot measures elsewhere. This is not supported and would likely qualify as WP:OR

I'd also like to note again, as I did in my previous request, that I think separating this content out in the manner it was separated out violates WP:STRUCTURE.

I hope that helps clear things up! Please let me know what you think! RWConagra (talk) 19:40, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

  Approved Thank you for providing the information as I have requested. As you can see, it was helpful in both illuminating the requested changes as a whole, as well as to help in fleshing out additional reasonings for the changes that weren't necessarily provided by you in your first request. I can see that the references provided for the contribution claims in the genetically modified foods section weren't substantiated, and that the bulk of the information is better handled elsewhere. So this change is approved. Regards,  Spintendo  23:13, 12 October 2023 (UTC)
Thank you for doing that! RWConagra (talk) 14:26, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
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