Talk:Conic bundle

Latest comment: 2 months ago by Justanothermathstudent in topic Article Structure

Problem with references

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Although the references provided are excellent books, they do not contain most of the material presented on this page. I will try to find more relevant refs. Wishcow 13:37, 11 September 2012 (UTC)

Article Structure

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I find the structure of this article a little confusing. While I don't have time for a serious overhaul, my initial instinct is to change the section title "A point of view" to "Expression", placing "The fiber c" and all subsections as a subsection to "Expression", as they all seem to be continuing the expression train of thought. I'm new to editing Wikipedia, so I thought I'd make sure nobody had any strong opinions on this; the article doesn't seem extremely active, though, so if I don't get any responses in a few days I'll make the changes. Justanothermathstudent (talk) 19:42, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

I've made the changes outlined above, as well as some minor semantic edits regarding the English on the page. I don't actually understand the concept very well, but if I have time to learn some more and edit the content I will. Justanothermathstudent (talk) 16:34, 23 August 2024 (UTC)Reply