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Perhaps it would be benefical to clarify Cappeletti is an association football coach and former player instead of just merely a football coach and former player
Done, yeah, that probably would be a good idea, changed.
"he lived in Tennessee and Germany before his family settled in Madison, Alabama ahead of his sophomore year of high school." - added another comma before "Alabama" and "ahead"
"with the Lions going 15-3-0" - the hyphens should be replaced by en dashes
Done, oops, good catch, changed!
"He went on to appear in 13 matches during his junior season, notably starting in all three games" - including
Done, changed to your recommendation.
"and was part of Valpo teams that earned back-to-back winning seasons for the first time in program history." - close paraphrasing of the text in bold that will require a rewrite
Done, changed the sentence to read "...and was part of Valpo squads that earned two consecutive winning seasons for the first time in the team's history.", if that removes the paraphrasing enough.
"As a senior, however, Cappelletti hardly saw the field:" - more formal and neutral Cappelletti was chosen to play less as a senior:
Done, changed the sentence to read "Cappelletti was chosen to play less as a senior: he appeared in just six matches for the Crusaders."
"he took the field with Indiana Invaders, based just 51 miles (82 kilometres) from the Valpo campus." - the text in bold is not mentioned by SoccerStats.us
Done, couldn't find any source better than directions off of Google Maps, so I removed that text entirely.
"and trained with Major League Soccer club Kansas City Wizards.[14][3]" - the refs should be in numerical order
"He made his Guamanian debut on November 6, 2016," - The EAFF match report does not explicity mention Cappelletti's international debut. The "Lane United's Cappelletti Earns Guam Call-up" article from USLLeagueTwo.com does and needs to be used to verify this portion of text
Done, added that citation to this section of text (while retaining it up above).
"Cappelletti appeared in all three of Guam's matches at the tournament, but would never again be called up by his country." - better and more neutral and was not called up by the country.
Reference 5 should include the page number that the story is located on along with the volume and issue of the newspaper that is front on the cover
Done, added this information to the citation.
Overall there are some issues concerning the verifiability of content that does not have the correct attached to it and some problems with the grammar in the prose. Will put the review on hold for the time being. MWright96(talk)16:52, 11 January 2020 (UTC)Reply