Talk:Constantine Komnenos Angelos/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 17:40, 4 May 2018 (UTC)

• I'll look at this one. Courcelles (talk) 17:40, 4 May 2018 (UTC)

• "Constantine Komnenos Angelos was born in c. 1151" Lose the in.
• "He must have had at least one son, whose name and life are likewise unknown." Can you explain, either in prose or footnote, why he must have had a son?
• ""farmers unfit for warfare and a contingent of Paphlagonian soldiers", led not even by an experienced commander but by "a certain eunuch"." Cite the quotes directly after.
• Can you translate or explain in parentheticals the various Byzantine offices whose names are italicized?
• The link to Prussa is to a dab page
• Link Fogg Art Museum, specify it is at Harvard.

• Good work on an obscure subject. Courcelles (talk) 17:54, 4 May 2018 (UTC)

Hi Courcelles, thanks for taking the time to review this! Your suggestions have been implemented. On the titles, I've opted for a description for most of them as most of them originally meant something quite different. Any suggestions beyond GA requirements? Not that this is likely to advance any more, but... Constantine ✍ 19:14, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

I think we're all good here now. As to further suggestions, I don't have any, I usually just dump what I notice in a GA review; and I think this article would have trouble at FAC for being too short, and, by the necessity of sourcing, having a couple ambiguous sections. At any rate, promoting to GA. Courcelles (talk) 19:23, 7 May 2018 (UTC)