Talk:Control car

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Latest comment: 1 year ago by Trainsandotherthings in topic Excessive images

Initial creation

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I created this article because there were several different versions on the English Wikipedia, each covering different and sometimes overlapping parts of the same subject. I also translated some information from the German article that wasn't present in any of the English versions.

I did read the comments on the talk pages before doing this, but as these articles are all referring to the exact same type of railroad vehicle, I thought it best to be bold and put everything together in a consistent format.

The only content removed from each individual article was that which was redundant between each article. The DBSO article I left alone because it contains quite a bit of specific information on that class of control car that wouldn't make sense to have in this article. --Cacetudo 17:58, 31 July 2006 (UTC)Reply

After feedback, I re-separated the DVT article. --Cacetudo 13:30, 7 August 2006 (UTC)Reply

Good article nomination

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I have judged this article as passing the GA criteria. One suggestion that I have is that it would be nicer to see the images in-line with the text, rather than as galleries. Good job, JYolkowski // talk 15:21, 20 August 2006 (UTC)Reply

Recentism

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With the mention of Cabbages, I realized that that section is not accurate. There were earlier uses of obsolete locomotives converted to cab cars. The most notable ones I can think of are Long Island Railroad ex-Alco FA cab cars. SpaceCaptain 17:32, 30 October 2006 (UTC)Reply

Great... please go ahead and edit the article. I for one don't know anything about those LIRR cabbages. Cacetudo 10:28, 31 October 2006 (UTC)Reply

Delisted GA

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This article has been delisted for failure to meet current GA criteria. Once the article has been brought up to standards, it may be renominated at WP:GAC. If you have any questions regarding this delisting, feel free to leave a message on my talk page. Additionally, if you feel this delisting was made in error, you may request remediation at WP:GA/R. Regards, LaraLoveT/C 05:01, 23 May 2007 (UTC)Reply

GA?!?! We're light years from it

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This article is far behind any "Good article" standard. IMHO:

  • it should provide a more worldwide perspective.
  • it should provide more detailed technical informations (perhaps).
    • it should be removed the remaining US/UK bias (ex. mentioning data only from those countries for "Command type").
    • image placing is mediocre.
    • prose and format quality varies from chapter to chapter (for example, the UK section is crappy as for format)

At light of all this, I downgraded the article to the C-class quality assessment. --Attilios (talk) 09:46, 6 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

Assessment comment

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The comment(s) below were originally left at Talk:Control car/Comments, and are posted here for posterity. Following several discussions in past years, these subpages are now deprecated. The comments may be irrelevant or outdated; if so, please feel free to remove this section.

== GA?!?! We're light years from it==

This article is far behind any "Good article" standard. IMHO:

  • it should provide a more worldwide perspective.
  • it should provide more detailed technical informations (perhaps).
    • it should be removed the remaining US/UK bias (ex. mentioning data only from those countries for "Command type").
    • image placing is mediocre.
    • prose and format quality varies from chapter to chapter (for example, the UK section is crappy as for format)

At light of all this, I downgraded the article to the C-class quality assessment.

--Attilios (talk) 09:46, 6 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

Substituted at 21:37, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Excessive images

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This article is not even an article, it's a foamer picturebook. And that's even after I made a major trim [1]. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 22:18, 1 November 2023 (UTC)Reply