Talk:Cool Me Down (Gromee and Inna song)

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February 1, 2022	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review

Latest comment: 2 years ago7 comments2 people in discussion

This review is transcluded from Talk:Cool Me Down (Gromee and Inna song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 22:15, 27 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )

3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will take this on tomorrow! --K. Peake 22:15, 27 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

WP:OVERLINK of Gromee under songwriters

It is common practice to link the artist in the infobox if their real name is used, for clarity.

Add "a few" before music critics because only three are noted in this article
""Cool Me Down" lyrically speaks" → "the song lyrically speaks"
The commercial performance sentence should be directly after the above one
"with the single's release, and the song" → "with the song's release, and it"
""Cool Me Down" was a moderate" → "The song was a moderate" and mention the chart it peaked on was the Polish Airplay Top 100

Background and release

Pipe demo to Demo (music)
The poke fun part is sourced, but where is dissatisfaction mentioned?
"Andrzej Gromala (Gromee)," → "Gromee under his real name of Andrzej Gromala," to be specific
"cover on their social media" → "cover art on their social media accounts"

Reception and composition

Retitle to Composition and reception, as the Wiwibloggs piece mentioning the genre should come first and commercial reception is already last
"found that "Cool Me Down" had a" → "observed how "Cool Me Down" has a"
"noticed that the song" → "noticed the song"
"Czech Republic and" → "the Czech Republic and"

This may be confusing, but there is not "the" in front of it. It's like that.

Music video and promotion

Remove "for "Cool Me Down"" after "accompanying music video"
"to the song wearing" → "to the song, wearing"

Track listing

Good

Charts

Weekly charts

Good

Year-end charts

Year-end chart performance for "Cool Me Down" → 2021 year-end chart performance for "Cool Me Down"

Release history

Good

References

Copyvio score looks great at 21.9%!!!
Use the via parameter instead to cite YouTube on refs 11, 12 and 13, adding Polsat as the publisher for #13

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this is quite a short article so shouldn't be very long! --K. Peake 08:52, 28 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

@Kyle Peake: Thank you very much for your review, I have fixed everything apart where noted. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:00, 31 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

@Cartoon network freak: I am glad to see a response before January has ended, but the wikilink under songwriters should be removed since most reading an article about an artist will already know/guess the real name part and even the Czech Republic article uses the term "the" at the start, so add this. --K. Peake 21:18, 31 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

@Kyle Peake:

Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:06, 1 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

✓ Pass now, very understanding of you to implement those last changes after my further explanations! --K. Peake 17:02, 1 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

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