Talk:Cormier wrestling family/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lord Roem (talk) 18:04, 1 March 2011 (UTC)

Doing this as part of the GA Backlog Elimination Drive. Article on review for at least 7 days before failed if changes listed below not resolved. Regards, Lord Roem (talk) 18:04, 1 March 2011 (UTC)

First thing I notice - are there no pictures you can add? Probably would make the article appear nicer :) Lord Roem (talk) 18:18, 1 March 2011 (UTC)

One of the guys just got a free image in the article, so I went ahead and added that. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:12, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Lead

• Brothers in the last sentence should be removed. Rephrase. -- Lord Roem (talk)
  • Done. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
• "Still wrestle occasionally" - relevant?
  • I believe that it is. The article gives a quick overview of their careers, so it seems worth noting that two of the careers are still going. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

Family

• Need a cite at the end of the sentence about their names being too hard to pronounce.
  • It was covered by the reference at the end of the paragraph, but I added another citation. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)
• Is "(Rudy)" a nickname?
  • The article explains that Jean-Louis was given the name because he looked like another wrestler named Rudy Kay. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

Brothers

• This section is ok, but go over it to make sure you don't have extraneous/non-relevant material.
  • I believe that it does a good job of sticking to the important points in giving a quick summary. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

Legacy

• Not much here about legacy, more of just modern feelings on them. Maybe add more to specific impacts they had on the sport?
  • There haven't been many specifics in the stories written about them, but I added some information about major stars that they helped out by either training or employing them. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

The general guideline is 7 days to resolve these issues before a decision is made on Promotion. Best regards, Lord Roem (talk) 02:58, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I nominated this so long ago that I had completely forgotten about it. I believe that I have addressed all of your concerns, but please let me know if anything else needs work. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:16, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

Great! Moving to promote now. Lord Roem (talk) 20:15, 6 March 2011 (UTC)