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Needs a lot of help
This article needs a lot of help. I pared it down a bit and tried re-writing some of the awkward language but it's still a mess. The citations being used are rather obscure and some don't seem to even be valid references at this point. It also seems to be suffering from buzzword over-use, but over-use in a way that doesn't even fit the context. I'll try and return and improve things if I can.