An example of corroboration

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I propose to delete the second (middle) paragraph of this section.

I think the example is poor, badly-written, badly punctuated, and hard to understand. It is replete with sentences that lack a verb. It is apparently describing evidence of a crime, but it's not clear what the crime is. And it is uncited (as is the entire section), and so is eligible for deletion. However I am not proposing to delete the entire section - just the middle paragraph (which is, admittedly, the bulk of the section).

Please provide a citation, which would (a) remove that ground for deletion, and (b) provide a source that could be used to improve the section. Ideally, please improve the section.

Living in urban area is more advantageous than living in rural area

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debate 102.89.34.78 (talk) 06:55, 5 June 2024 (UTC)Reply