Talk:County Route 106 (Rockland County, New York)/GA1

GA Review

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Comments:

1. First sentence: indicate route is in Rockland County, New York
2. Combine last two sentences in first paragraph of lead
3. First paragraph of route description: remove information that will be repeated later, such as intersections with PIP and US 9W/202, and move information about former NY 210 designation to history
4. rewrite "Lake Welch Parkway (seasonal road), which provides..." to say "Lake Welch Parkway, a seasonal road which provides..."
5. Try not to use "CR 106" in every sentence of route description
6. Remove second sentence of third paragraph of route description and add "where CR 106 makes a left turn" to prior sentence
7. Wikilink Palisades Interstate Parkway
8. Combine last two sentences in third paragraph of route description
9. "semi-highway"? Sounds awkward
10. Combine last two sentences of route description
11. Second sentence of history: added "and headed" after Monroe
12. Combine third and fourth sentences in history
13. Make "CR 106A" a subheading of the history section
14. In major intersections, indicate former county route designations in notes

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 16:44, 25 January 2009 (UTC)

I did all but the subhead of CR 106A as one, it would be an MOS violation, and as is, it meets USRD standards.Mitch32^{(Go Syracuse)} 19:35, 25 January 2009 (UTC)