Talk:County Route 166A (Sullivan County, New York)/GA1

GA Review

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Comments:

1. Try to get a map of the article for the infobox
2. Wikilink County Route 166 (Sullivan County, New York) in infobox
3. "Masten Lake Crossover Road" does not need to be in italics
4. "the community"? Can you please clarify what community?
5. Add some more historical information to the lead
6. "all woodlands, with no buildings"? A little wordy, "woodland" would suffice here
7. "commercial residence"? sounds awkward
8. "downtown community": remove "community"
9. "things had changed dramatically" sounds like a NPOV violation, remove the word dramatically and rephrase
10. "onto Exit 112 to County Route 172" sounds awkward
11. In last sentence of history, change second "of" to "by"
12. Is the mileage known for the NY 17 intersection?
13. If possible, try to get a picture of the route for the article

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 14:31, 8 March 2009 (UTC)

Done.Mitch32^{(Go Syracuse)} 14:44, 8 March 2009 (UTC)