Talk:County Route 74 (Rockland County, New York)/GA1

GA Review

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Comments:

1. Do we know the exact year County Route 74 was created?
2. Remove the image from the infobox and place in the route description
3. Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
4. In lead, use "Rockland County" instead of "Rockland"
5. Mention some of the historical information in the lead
6. Route description: replace "nearby" with "after" in second sentence
7. Last sentence in first paragraph of route description: replace "into" with "enters"
8. "community of houses" sounds awkward
9. "passing into the community of Viola" sounds awkward
10. Combine sixth and seventh sentences in second paragraph of route description
11. First sentence in third paragrph: begin with "Past the NY 306 intersection"
12. "sinks into the developed community" sounds awkward
13. replace "makes a drop" with "turns"
14. "developed community of homes in businesses"? try rephrasing
15. replace "buildings" with "areas" as the road does not pass through the actual buildings
16. Combine first two sentences in last paragraph of route description
17. Last sentence of route description: isn't CR 35A Clarkstown Road?
18. First sentence of history: remove "also"
19. Second sentence of history: remove "for them"
20. Last sentence in first paragraph of history: use semicolon after 1905
21. Is there a reference for the mileage in the major intersections

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 15:32, 25 January 2009 (UTC)

All done, and there is no exact date.Mitch32^{(Go Syracuse)} 15:44, 25 January 2009 (UTC)