Talk:Cristian Montaño/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 07:35, 17 August 2020 (UTC)

I'll take this one up as well, review coming as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 07:35, 17 August 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• Link loan to Loan (sports).
  • Done.EchetusXe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
• League Two is linked twice in the lead.
  • Done.EchetusXe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

Early life

• Generally countries are an WP:OVERLINK, so the Colombia and United Kingdom links are probably unnecessary.
  • Done.EchetusXe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

West Ham United

• Link the first mention of loan again.
  • Done.EchetusXe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

Oldham Athletic

• "He scored twice in 15 games in the first half of the 2013–14 season", needs a source.
  • Done.EchetusXe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
• "as the support of friends and supporters", the support of supporters is quite repetitive in the quote caption. Can this be reworded slightly?
  • Done.EchetusXe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

Port Vale

• "better at left back then when", probably worth amending then to than here as it's a minor quote error, per MOS:SIC.
  • Done.EchetusXe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

References

• Avoid shouting in ref titles, per WP:ALLCAPS.
  • Done.EchetusXe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
• A couple of the West Ham refs appear to have expired, refs 4 and 12 for example, can we recover these?
  • Replaced and removed.EchetusXe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

A few minor points, but overall this is a very tidy article. Put on hold for now while these are addressed. Kosack (talk) 06:46, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

Looks good to me, happy to promote. Kosack (talk) 19:22, 21 August 2020 (UTC)