Talk:Crystal McKenzie

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Teratix in topic BOLD rewrite

COI tag

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I added the COI tag due to my concerns that this article is the product of paid editing. ThemFromSpace 00:51, 10 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

Could you please indicate specific examples of wording within this article which you feel do not reflect a sufficiently neutral point of view? ChulaOne (talk) 17:43, 12 April 2009 (UTC)Reply
I found this article through the posting at WP:COIN. In my view, lack of coverage of Crystal McKenzie in reliable sources is the main problem with the article. I looked through three of the references and could not find 'McKenzie' anywhere in the text. If this firm's promotion of these shows were considered important, wouldn't that be documented somewhere? Ideally, the story of a firm can be written in Wikipedia based on what other people have written about the firm. I'm not seeing any third-party sources which talk about the firm in this article. The firm's own web site talks about the firm, but that's not enough. EdJohnston (talk) 04:44, 13 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

BOLD rewrite

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I have BOLDly rewritten this article to reflect the more significant coverage of the founder, rather than the company. It is quite a drastic change, so revert if you have any problems. TeraTIX 02:28, 4 September 2018 (UTC)Reply