Talk:Cudi Montage

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Carbrera in topic GA Review
Good articleCudi Montage has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starCudi Montage is part of the Kids See Ghosts (album) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
December 31, 2020Good article nomineeListed
March 31, 2021Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Cudi Montage/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:15, 25 December 2020 (UTC)Reply


Hello, I will pick up this article for review too since I am now partly aware of West's career in 2018. I will finish this one within a few days, hopefully sooner than the last one. Carbrera (talk) 01:15, 25 December 2020 (UTC).Reply

@Carbrera: Thank you for taking another one on; just remember that "Kiss in Songs" still needs all of the fixes to be implemented soon! --K. Peake 05:51, 25 December 2020 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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  • Personally, I would link "Wyoming" too because I'd assume that most non-Americans are not familiar with it.
  • "complemented" --> "complimented"

Background and development

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  • I feel as if "The song samples the work of Kurt Cobain, who both members of Kids See Ghosts had made acknowledgements of in the past" could be reworded as "The song samples the work of Kurt Cobain, who both members of Kids See Ghosts had acknowledged in the past"

Reception

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  • Prose-wise, I have no concerns about this section but the first paragraph is, visibly, much longer than the others on this page. This is just a suggestion, but feel free to split into two paragraphs if you find a natural split.
  • "complementing" --> "complimenting"
  • "overwhelemed" --> "overwhelmed"
  • You could mention its chart position on the UK Streaming chart if you want

Credits and personnel

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  • I would separately link Wyoming here too
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I will place this article on hold until the comments above can be addressed. I think it is very close to meeting all of the GA criteria. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 08:40, 31 December 2020 (UTC).Reply

Carbrera I have responded to all of your points even if the review was later than expected; ready to pass now? --K. Peake 09:02, 31 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
I will be passing this article now as I believe it meets all of the GA criteria. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 10:36, 31 December 2020 (UTC).Reply