Talk:Cutbacks (30 Rock)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: BelovedFreak 22:01, 8 June 2010 (UTC)

• No dab links or dead external links. Images and references look fine.

• I did a little bit of a copyedit on the plot, please cheek it's ok, specifically, I put that Jenna and Tracy "run out of his apartment" - not sure if that's the case, so please revert that if necessary!
  • The plot looks good, thanks for the copy-edit. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 14:56, 9 June 2010 (UTC)

• Could you add something on cultural references to the lead?
  • IDK, this is the only thing I'm coming up with ---> "This episode of 30 Rock featured a number of cultural references to the legal crime thriller film The Pelican Brief (1993), and Liz Lemon parodying Steve Jobs's clothing attire while giving a presentation."
    • That would be fine. Although, "clothing" probably redundant to "attire". :) --BelovedFreak 16:01, 9 June 2010 (UTC)
      • Oops, forgot to remove "clothing", and has been added to the lead. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:10, 9 June 2010 (UTC)
• The only other request I have, is, could you add something about Steve jobs in the cultural refs section, so that the image caption isn't the only mention of that?
  • Done.
    • Granted it would be virtually impossible to cite a source, but it's pretty clear she's not just parodying his attire but also his overall presentation style. I can't come up with a wording that doesn't come across as viciously mocking Steve Jobs, but it would be nice if the article reflected it. Aoystreck (talk) 02:18, 13 September 2010 (UTC)

Very little to do, putting it on hold. --BelovedFreak 22:01, 8 June 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 14:56, 9 June 2010 (UTC)