Talk:D'Estrées-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 22:53, 17 September 2020 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:53, 17 September 2020 (UTC)

@Sturmvogel 66: - any chance we can get this done before the end of the month? Parsecboy (talk) 12:02, 26 September 2020 (UTC)

There is!

• No DABs.
• Photos properly licensed, although it might be useful to tell readers the source of the diagram
  • Good idea
• Link mast
  • Done
• 138 mm (5.4 in) Modèle 1893 45-caliber guns suggest moving 45-caliber to the beginning so the numbers don't blend together.
  • I don't like doing that because it's not how guns are typically described, and there's the possibility of confusion for readers familiar with small arms (and who might miss that there's not a leading decimal)
• distributed atop and in the upper deck and, the latter firing through gun ports. Awkward.
  • See how I reworded it
• in the central power of the ships Amidships?
  • One wonders what I was listening to when I typed that...
    • One does, doesn't one? I think that amidships works better, but your fix works too...--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:29, 29 September 2020 (UTC)
• Link headers in the table--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:45, 28 September 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 20:20, 28 September 2020 (UTC)