Talk:DAT Solutions

Latest comment: 7 years ago by RossO in topic Content review

Content review

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ALL: I have recently rewritten this page and would like it to be reviewed in light of the updates. I have tried to steer away from WP:COI issues, but I am only human. (At least I get through most CAPTCHAs, so that counts, right?). Thank you for your time and comments. — RossO (talk) 18:13, 10 August 2017 (UTC)Reply

1. @DGG: Thank you for noting your concern by placing an advert tag on the page. Can you give me some pointers on the problematic portions? I don't think this is WP:IBA, but I'm not sure which portions conflict with WP:NOTADVERTISING. Any specifics that you can offer would be greatly appreciated. Thank you for your time. — RossO (talk) 17:17, 17 August 2017 (UTC)Reply

This was the first source I looked at. How about deleting the podcast source and associated laundry list of service offerings. "Try Trucker’s Edge Free for 30 Days... Go to [800 number] and give them promo code 741. Please be sure to tell them you heard about it on The Trucking Podcast" should be a tipoff this isn't great. ☆ Bri (talk) 18:42, 18 August 2017 (UTC)Reply
@Bri: That's a very fair statement. The goal of that citation was to give a reference for what the services actually provide. I will work through [1] and find additional neutral sources such as an industry-specific publication that can provide that support. Your comment is very appreciated. I will also apply a higher level of rigor to the other citations. — RossO (talk) 07:10, 20 August 2017 (UTC)Reply