Talk:DISCLOSE Act
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editA few points on formatting:
- words in subheadings are not capitalized unless they are the first word or proper nouns - see WP:HEAD
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- the names of newspapers, magazines and TV/radio programs should be italicized, but names of websites like the Huffington Post should not be. Ground Zero | t 17:59, 3 December 2010 (UTC)
Article currently says:
The Senate attempted to take up the legislation prior to the October recess working period, but failed to reach agreement on the Senate version (S.3628) on September 23, by a vote of 59-39 (Roll call # 240).
I find this sentence confusing. I suggest changing it to:
The bill failed in the Senate. On September 23 the bill's supporters came one vote short of the 60-vote majority required to end debate and bring the bill (S.3628) to a vote prior to Senate recess (Roll call # 240).
Partisan language
editSome of the language in this article is very partisan and opinionated. Please revise. Black Max (talk) 22:21, 17 July 2012 (UTC) Black Max
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DISCLOSE Act of 2015
edit... is not (yet) included. I'm not sure of the notability of unpassed legislation, but, if we include some of these, we should include all. — Arthur Rubin (talk) 23:21, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
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