Talk:DJ Lynnwood

Latest comment: 18 years ago by AbsolutDan in topic Untitled

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This looks like self promotion/vanity page. Citations are probably needed for a lot of the information. Mefanch 22:51, 1 September 2006 (UTC)Reply

Disagree with any deletions. This article can be bettered via research. I will make some relational changes as verified. TomStone

Re your recent edit summary: "blatant vanity" in my terminology does not have anything to do with the quality or tone of what is written. It is simply when, for example, user:Djlynnwood creates an article called DJ Lynnwood. Non-blatant vanity is when, for example, user:TomStone edits an article called DJ Lynnwood. -- RHaworth 23:40, 1 September 2006 (UTC)Reply

This article is in need of more sources. The Billboard biography helps, but it doesn't back up such claims as "became the #2 radio station in the market", "This feature was the highest rated show on KGGI", "The CD was a huge success, selling over 100 thousand units in the US and Canada alone", the claim about coining the term "Chicago hard house", and the bit about the automobile accident. The other 2 "sources": "Record sales can be verified via Soundscan" and "Radio shows can be verified at Los Angeles Radio Guide" aren't proper citations for the content.

Additionally, it needs to be written from a more neutral point of view (WP:NPOV). --AbsolutDan (talk) 23:56, 1 September 2006 (UTC)Reply

I will work on edits to story and sources over weekend. I can find sales data an make some changes to overall symantics. I really screwed up in choosing my user name though.