Talk:Damien (South Park)/GA1

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Excellent article, guys! You can probably gets this to FA status in the future.

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Lead It was directed by Trey Parker... – His full name has already been mentioned.  Done was rated TV-MA-L in the United States – Add an explanation of what TV-MA-L means ("for strong to extreme language").  Done Plot Link characters such as Kenny and Mr. Mackey.  Done Link "duck-billed platypus"  Done The kids return from the cable studio with – Cable studio? I don't see this in the article anymore, so I'm guessing Moody got it. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 02:55, 8 April 2009 (UTC) Tomorrow The next day at the South Park Forum Same as above. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 02:55, 8 April 2009 (UTC) Use Template:Convert to convert pounds into kilograms. Done. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 02:55, 8 April 2009 (UTC) Spell out contractions such as "it's", "didn't", and "that's" (I'm not sure if there's more). I think we got them all except the quotes, obviously. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 02:55, 8 April 2009 (UTC) Production Image caption says "Weight Gain 4000" when it should say "Damien".  Done in part because it was the first new episode of  Done Trey Parker said he and fellow show creator Matt Stone  Done so Matt Stone instead provided the character's voice  Done By the time "Damien" was filmed – Is "filmed" really the right word? I don't think animated shows are filmed so a better word would be "animated".  Done three-dimension seldom used in the series before – Should it be "three-dimension seldom never used in the series before"?  Done naturally while filming recording the episode Kenny, Jimbo, duck-billed platypus, and Pip should be linked in the plot section, not here.  Done along with 11 eleven other episodes  Done along with the other 12 twelve from the first season  Done Other Repeated use of "kid/s" isn't really formal - I'd go with "child/ren", but it's not too big a deal. Looks like Moody got these too, besides the quotes again. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 02:55, 8 April 2009 (UTC) Themes Trey Parker said the writers sought  Done Seitz said the episode mocks people who "morality cops who misbehave in private"  Done Matt Stone said of this aspect  Done Cultural references provided by Trey Parker (sorry for nagging) ;P  Done Pinhead character at the ending of the 1992 horror movie film, Hellraiser III: Hell on Earth  Done Unlink Mr. Mackey and Priest Maxi Done. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 05:03, 9 April 2009 (UTC) even though it was filmed produced afterward. Done. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 05:03, 9 April 2009 (UTC) which was still extremely popular Done. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 05:03, 9 April 2009 (UTC) Reception What does "HH" mean? I honestly don't know! lol But looking back at the source it appears to be the same as Nielsen Rating, so I'll drop the use of the HH thing altogether to avoid confusion. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 05:03, 9 April 2009 (UTC) What episode got "5.4 viewers in 3.2 million households", "Damien" or "Mecha-Streisand"? "Mecha-Streisand". Unfortunately, the source doesn't have the viewers/households for "Damien" specifically, but I thought it was worth including the Mecha-Streisand numbers because it gave a bit of context to what the ratings mean for both episodes. I threw the part in question into parenthesis to try to clarify which episode it relates to. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 05:03, 9 April 2009 (UTC) Trey Parker said following the tremendous  Done Rolling Stone contributor Doug Pratt called it a "high point" of the first season  Done Gary Budzak of The Columbus Dispatch described Damien – Damien the character or Damien the episode? :P Episode. :D Fixed. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 05:03, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

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• which leads to the ultimate fight between Jesus and Satan – How does it lead to the "ultimate fight" between Jesus and Satan?

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 Not done – That sentence still doesn't make any sense for someone who hasn't read the plot section. :P TheLeftorium 16:01, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

• Better now? — Hunter Kahn _(contribs) 05:03, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

• I made some changes to the sentence. Let me know what you think. —TheLeftorium 12:22, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

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I will finish the review later today or tomorrow. —TheLeftorium 16:27, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

• Thank you, sir! Let me know if we missed anything above between the two of us. Thanks for the review! — Hunter Kahn _(contribs) 02:55, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
  • I have finished the review now and I will take another quick look once you're done with this. :) TheLeftorium 16:32, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
    • Thanks again! — Hunter Kahn _(contribs) 05:03, 9 April 2009 (UTC)
      • Everything looks good so I will pass the article now! —TheLeftorium 12:22, 9 April 2009 (UTC)