Talk:Dan Gilroy

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Dan Gilroy is a police officer who beat up 15 year old Shelwanda Riley in Florida, who wrote this article? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=10VKwULQbb8 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.112.221.71 (talk) 22:52, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

i don't think that is the same guy... — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.145.48.230 (talk) 14:26, 1 February 2012 (UTC)

Mother Goose Rock n Rhyme

i never ever ever heard of this guy. the only reason i know him, is from watching the above mentioned movie, he was pretty much the main character. i would guess that he's probably just as well known for that role than for the other writing credits listed on this page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.145.48.230 (talk) 14:25, 1 February 2012 (UTC)

apparently i was wrong, as someone i read knows him from somewhere else. he was a member of the band Breakfast Club and dated Madonna for a period of time. i read about this at http://mediapotluck.blogspot.com/2009/09/mother-goose-rock-n-rhyme-1990.html — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.145.48.230 (talk) 17:00, 1 February 2012 (UTC)

Madonna

This is not the same Dan Gilroy who was a member of Breakfast Club and dated Madonna — Preceding unsigned comment added by 143.85.199.242 (talk) 19:21, 26 December 2012 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Dan Gilroy/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 19:54, 27 November 2017 (UTC)

I'll take a look and make straightforward copyedits as I go (please revert if I accidentally change the meaning!) and jot notes below Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 19:54, 27 November 2017 (UTC)

• Lead is a bit slim

• What do you suggest I add? I think it's reasonably long for an article that has nearly 6k prose size

• Maybe it's just because I am looking at it on a widescreen - yeah not sure either. Need ot think about this Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 15:02, 1 December 2017 (UTC)

• Alright, I expanded this a tad bit by adding his frequent collaboration with his wife. Let me know what's up. Slightlymad 11:31, 2 December 2017 (UTC)

• Try to minimise (if possible) the number of paragraphs that start with "Gilroy..."

• Done

• Dan Gilroy recalled growing up "in a house where our father was a working writer and working at home. We got to see him write, and that demystified the process of becoming a writer." - rewrite and paraphrase without quoting.

• Done

• The Career section is a bit listy. It would greatly benefit from any other information or fleshing out of his involvement with each or any movie. Any extra sourceable material here would be great.

• I've added some blurb about his new film, though I couldn't really find coverage of his involvement on those films he had previously written as a screenwriter. Slightlymad 14:06, 1 December 2017 (UTC)

• Hmm, a pity - I keep thinking there must be something out there....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 15:02, 1 December 2017 (UTC)

as the previous cut had lay much emphasis on the characters - grammar? "lain"?

I suppose that's correct, changed. Slightlymad 14:59, 1 December 2017 (UTC)

• Hi Casliber, can I get a status update on the review? Did you want me to expand it further with regard to the remaining issues? Slightlymad 05:02, 5 December 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, I meanto to have a look myself to see whether there was anything out there to add. Hang on....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:13, 5 December 2017 (UTC) bleh, you're right...nothing coming up. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:21, 5 December 2017 (UTC)

NB: Earwigs is ok Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:21, 5 December 2017 (UTC)

1. Well written?:

Prose quality:

Manual of Style compliance:

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:

References to sources:

Citations to reliable sources, where required:

No original research:

3. Broad in coverage?:

Major aspects: (in an ideal world, there'd be some more background on some earlier movies but then, are we surprised that Freejack has been well and truly forgotten about by everybody?

Focused:

4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:

Fair representation without bias:

5. Reasonably stable?

No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:

Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

Overall:

Pass or Fail: - ok all good now. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:21, 5 December 2017 (UTC)