Talk:Dancing with the Fishes
Latest comment: 16 years ago by Emeraude in topic Untitled
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editThe writing style in this article is atrocious and not at all what is expected in an encyclopaedia. From the first sentence: "It’s a beautiful NYC night and we see three motorcyclists racing down Manhattan’s FDR drive". It's = It is. Who are "we"? drive =Drive. And then it all goes downhill. Rewrite needed please. Emeraude (talk) 09:37, 10 April 2008 (UTC)