Talk:Dark Fantasy (song)
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Reviewer: Puffin (talk · contribs) 16:27, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | "written by Kanye West, Ernest Wilson, Jeff Bhasker, Mike Dean and the RZA." But in the infobox, it says the RZA produced it. Can you provide a citation and clarify this please?
In the info box, you say "My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy track listing "Dark Fantasy" (1) "Gorgeous" (2)" But, just below that you say it again. I suppose the bottom one is the track listing, but the top one needs to be appropriately titled. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | Avoid the word "popular" It is a peacock term. Also avoid the word "various" because it's too vague. You use it here: "lyrics on the track contain various musical and popular culture references,"
The caption of the sound says "Kanye raps several pop culture references in this verse" Avoid the word "several" it is too vague.
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| 2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | Be consistent with your references. It's better to say "Retrieved" than "Retrieved on" |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | In the lead "The song was used in advertisements for the film The Hangover Part II." is not mentioned later in the article. It either needs a citation or needs to be mentioned later with a citation. |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | N/A |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | A picture of the album cover would be good, but if you can't get one, don't worry, it's not a major problem. |
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7. Overall assessment. | You did it! Puffin Let's talk! 17:56, 4 December 2011 (UTC) |
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Is dark fantasy copyrighted?
editJust asking 89.205.124.31 (talk) 08:21, 9 June 2024 (UTC)