Talk:Dark Passion Play/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 05:54, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

Im sorry but i am going to be failing this article are there are substantial issue that cannot be corrected in seven days. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me -

• WP:LEAD; generally references should not be in the lead unless to cite claims that are likely to be argued. The lead summarizes the article, hence references are redundant.
• WP:RS issues, what makes; Metal from Finland, TuomasHolopainen.net, Metal Storm, SpeedSoft.com, Blabbermouth.net (ect) all high quality reliable sources needed for GA status?
• WP:NFCC; File:Dark Passion Play.jpg needs to be reduced to 300x 300.
• Prose issues all over the place; "Another songs are pure fantasy," "the album also has the songs "Amaranth", with lyrics about never-fading things" "Tuomas Holopainen (pictured) composed the most of the lyrics on the album" and more than a dozen others.
• Dark_Passion_Play#Charts.2C_sales_and_procession; this entire section is not done properly, sources need to be from third party sources not the bands website. Please see Wikipedia:Record_charts#Recommended_charts for proper archives.
• WP:MOS references issues, incorrect use of italics, incorrect work and publisher fields... ect.

These are just some of the many issues with this article; Concerned editors please see Animal (Kesha album), The Fame Monster, or Hard Candy (Madonna album) for proper Good articles. Thank you. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 05:54, 1 June 2011 (UTC)