Talk:Datalore/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 00:14, 14 May 2013 (UTC)

• " It would be Roddenberry's final script credit on a Star Trek series" -- Might want to clarify what happened after this.

• Let me dig out a reliable source - I found this here which states what needs to be said, but I can get a better source than that. I'll flick through the books later and get the reference added. Miyagawa (talk) 18:53, 14 May 2013 (UTC)

• "who thought that the actions were not in line with his expectations of his character." -- Which character? Data or Lore? And how did each of them not work?

• Fixed to Data. Miyagawa (talk) 18:53, 14 May 2013 (UTC)

• "Wil Wheaton later recalled that the stand-in actor used in this episode really irritated Spiner and was never used again." -- What was his name?

• Wheaton couldn't remember, but he did say that it wasn't Guy Vardaman, who took over that role after this episode. Miyagawa (talk) 18:53, 14 May 2013 (UTC)

• "reprising the role of Lore in the fourth season episode fourth season episode "Brothers" and the two parter "Descent", split between the sixth and seventh seasons." -- I don't know at all what this is saying.

• Simplified to "Brent Spiner reprised the role of Lore in the episodes "Brothers" and "Descent". I guess something distracted me when I was typing in order for me to type "fourth season fourth season" into a sentence. :) Miyagawa (talk) 18:53, 14 May 2013 (UTC)

• There is one duplicate link, but the disambiguation links and external links all appear to be fine.

• Fixed. Miyagawa (talk) 18:53, 14 May 2013 (UTC)

• I see no issues with article stability or neutrality. The image appears to be properly licensed.

Placing the article on hold pending a few minor fixes. —Ed!^(talk) 01:48, 14 May 2013 (UTC)

Good work, passing the GA. —Ed!^(talk) 01:46, 15 May 2013 (UTC)