Talk:Dave Stamper

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Aircorn in topic GA Reassessment
Former good articleDave Stamper was one of the Media and drama good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 1, 2011Good article nomineeListed
November 29, 2020Good article reassessmentDelisted
Current status: Delisted good article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Dave Stamper/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: GRAPPLE X 12:57, 1 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


Do forgive me, but I'll be conducting this review with Michigan J. Frog's voice stuck in my head. :/

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
    MOS compliance is ok, but could be better. I'd drop the heading level on sections 2-5, grouping them all under "Career" or the like. However, the lead is much too short (given the length of the article, I'd say one paragraph of good size should do it. Two sentences is too little, though). Also, when you quote June Moon, you have "Dave Stamper says its sure fire." Should this be "it's sure fire"? I don't have a copy of the play so I don't know if this is a mistake in the original text (which case you should note it with [sic]) or a typo here.
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
    Citations are fine, used appropriately, and everything mentioned is backed up nicely.
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
    Scope is broad without going places it shouldn't.
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
    Article is neutral and unbiased.
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
    Article
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
    Images are fine. Both of them used are in the public domain so that's no issue.
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  
    I'm probably going to pass this article, however, before this can happen I would like the first point to be addressed. Just expand the lead to summarise the article's content a bit more - one sentence for every heading is about right. When doing so, though, bear in mind that sections 2-5 should be grouped under one heading, not left as they are. When this is done, let me know, and until then, I'll keep the article on hold.|I'm probably going to pass this article, however, before this can happen I would like the first point to be addressed. Just expand the lead to summarise the article's content a bit more - one sentence for every heading is about right. When doing so, though, bear in mind that sections 2-5 should be grouped under one heading, not left as they are. When this is done, let me know, and until then, I'll keep the article on hold.
    I'm satisfied with the changes made, and will pass the article.|}}
Thanks for taking the time to review. I've done the body edits you've suggested, and will work on the lead in the next day or two. The June Moon problem was due to a OCR error. K8 fan (talk) 18:41, 1 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
Added information to the lead. Would love to see a better writer polish the style a bit.K8 fan (talk) 19:09, 1 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
Done and done. GRAPPLE X 19:26, 1 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
Thanks again for reviewing the article. Hopefully the Good Article status will attract the attention of a better writer than myself to tweak the prose a bit. As you can see from the history, I've added bits and pieces over a fairly long period of time, haven't done much to polish it and don't have the distance from the content to do a good job.K8 fan (talk) 19:35, 1 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
I think people are more inclined to pitch in when they feel they're adding to something proven rather than needing to overhaul something rough, so you've laid a good foundation for future editors to improve this further. GRAPPLE X 19:37, 1 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA Reassessment

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