Talk:Death in Bloom/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hmlarson (talk · contribs) 03:55, 30 December 2013 (UTC) Hello, I have begun the review and will be posting feedback below. As issues are addressed, please add a note indicating your changes to the relevant item listed below. Thank you. Hmlarson (talk) 02:48, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

Comment

Overall, this is a well-written article that meets all of the criteria for a Good Article. I made a few minor copy edits summarized below.

Lead

• I wikified storyboarded. Hmlarson (talk) 03:55, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

Plot

• I made some minor copy edits to this section. Hmlarson (talk) 03:55, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

Production

• I made some minor copy edits to this section. Hmlarson (talk) 03:55, 30 December 2013 (UTC)

Review checklist

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   A well-written article. I had a few suggested copy edits listed above that I ended up making myself.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   n/a

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail: