Talk:Decade of Aggression/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Adabow in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 09:26, 31 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • "and executive produced by Richard Kimball" - not mentioned later
  • "Three of the album's tracks were included in the box set Soundtrack to the Apocalypse." - not mentioned later

Conception

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  • "on October 22, 1991, almost a month after Nirvana's Nevermind." - what does this have to do with Nevermind?
  • "to give them time to decide what their next album's style would be." - the link of "style" it music genre is a bit WP:EASTEREGG, as style and genre can be a bit different. If you mean genre, just say genre.
  • "one hour, twenty-five (eighty-five) minutes, and twenty-eight seconds" - confusing. Either remove bracketed info or say 'one hour, twenty-five minutes, and twenty-eight seconds (85:28)', or similar

Reception

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  • The second paragraph has a strange tense, and is inconsistent. Cover all to past tense.
  • "The album would chart on four different charts" – there are only three

Track listing

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  • Source?

Credits

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  • Source?
  • Please split into two columns
  • Jobs/tasks should be in lowercase

References

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  • Should come after 'Notes'

OK, passing now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 08:19, 1 January 2011 (UTC)Reply