Talk:Deep Run High School/Archive 1

Archive 1

Grammar

Uh, just wondering, but where it says their book club "meets AND discusses books" does this mean that they not only discuss the books, but become personally aquainted with them? I believe it should read "meets TO discuss books" 72.82.51.240 (talk) 11:08, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

Protected

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Protected again

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Personal Information?

Is it really a good plan to put the first & last names of all the section leaders? and even if it is a good idea, does it totally go as encyclopedic? (Cantras) 67.55.193.80 17:46, 21 November 2006 (UTC)

Good point. I have deleted these. Next time feel free to edit the article yourself. Wikipedia generally does not list this type of information unless it is "notable"... such as making national news. MPS 18:16, 21 November 2006 (UTC)

Norovirus

Does anyone else think the section devoted to the norovirus is unnecessary? It just seems like an isolated problem that happened a while ago and is now old news that needn't be published here. Wikieditor06 04:19, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

Agreed and deleted. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Dble0Negative (talk • contribs) 06:02, 27 April 2007 (UTC).

Assessment

Start class, good picture, little bit of information, the song is a tad crufty. History information and RS are required here. Low importance, google search turned back little. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Twenty Years (talk • contribs)

Edits by user 71.206.171.8

I am posting this comment here as you may not have recieved remarks on your talkpage as you are editing with an anon a/c. Pls note that wiki's core policy is to observe a neutral point of view. Your edits have been reverted as they seemed to be based on personal opinions and may be viewed as slander. Please edit with good faith and observe our policy. Thank you. --Nuttycoconut 05:57, 16 September 2007 (UTC)

Well, this is a new school so there is little history available at this point in time. However, I will edit it to the best of my abillities --1337donald —Preceding comment was added at 14:44, 17 December 2007 (UTC)

Re-assessment

I am re-assessing this article after a request to B / Low. Quite a good article now with an info-box and several pictures and a sensibly good lay out. The main weakness with the article is a lack of referencing, but what has been referenced has been cited correctly. If this article is going to reach GA class much more referencing is needed, some sections are currently not referenced at all. I suggest expanding the academics section - per WP:SCH#WNTI try and convert this section into prose and put it into context of the school if possible. A section of notable alumni would also be good - I am sure there are some, just make sure this section is sourced. Finally, more pictures would help brighten up the article - in particular a picture on the logo of the school in the info-box would be wise. Keeping importance as low as not quite enough in the article as of yet suggests a higher importance. Camaron1 | Chris (talk) 15:24, 20 December 2007 (UTC)

TSA

Seeing as TSA is already mentioned as an extracurricular activity, I think its inclusion in the co-curricular activities section is superfluous. Also, the majority of the content was a summary of TSA's mission and information regarding the organization that can be found by clicking on the link to the Technology Student Association page. The names included did not seem to meet Wikipedia's notability criteria. --Wikieditor06 (talk) 04:28, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

Propose Redirect

Due to the fact that Middle and High schools usually have no-importance and should not be stand along articles, I propose that this page should be redirected to the main district article. ► Wireless Keyboard ◄ 19:21, 14 January 2011 (UTC)